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请高手帮忙翻译，请不要用翻译软件直译！谢谢！ 我就剩下这点分了，全部作为悬赏了，请高手帮忙翻译！

承 诺 书

我是留学申请人XX菲的继父，生于1953年8月17日。2003年退休后结识了当时正值创业的刘亚清女士，共同的兴趣以及对事业的追求使我们很快走到一起，我们一起学习工作，2007年我们加盟了鞍山衣本色洗衣连锁，良好的服务态度，过硬的技术使我们很快就积累了大量的客户，2009年友邦的加盟更使我们的服务提升了档次，牢牢吸引稳定了客户。现在每年营业收入能在稳定在人民币70万以上，实现利润30万左右。虽然我是XX的继父，但共同生活的6年拉近了我们的距离，非常支持她出国留学，希望她能在国外增加见识，增长知识，提高自己的能力。
我郑重承诺，愿意在经济上无条件的支持她完成这几年的学业。我们知道，澳大利亚留学的资金担保都需要有六个月的历史，但由于购买店面，添置设备占用我们很大资金，不能满足贵国资金担保的要求。所以，我们以我们的房产和店面向中国银行鞍山分行申请RMB600，000.00元的留学贷款，并且已经通过银行的审查，开据出国留学贷款通知书，这样就我们的孩子出国留学提供了必要的资金保障。
在此，我郑重声明：
我完全同意并全力支持我女儿XX去澳大利亚留学，并保证她在澳大利亚留学期间的学费、生活费及一切其它费用。同时我同意她母亲去澳大利亚做她的监护人。让她能够更好的完成这几年的学业，早日找到自己的真正生活位置！

Answer 1

Commitment Letter

I'm the stepfather of the applicant, ***. My D.O.B. is Aug 17, 1953. After I retired in 2003, I met Ms Liu Yaqing, who was then trying to start her own business. We shared the same interests and the same pursuit, so soon we went on hand in hand, studying and working together. In 2007, we affiliated to the Yibense Laundry Chain Store in Anshan. By offering great services we established a large client base in a short time, and Youbang's joining in us in 2009 even elevated us to another level and thus firmed the client base. Now our annual revenue is over RMB 700,000 Yuan, and the annual profit would be approximately RMB 300,000 Yuan. Although I'm ***'s stepfather, we have spent 6 years living together, which strengthened the bonds between us. Therefore I'm very supportive that she studies abroad, and I hope she can broaden her view, expand her knowledge and improve her competence by studying abroad.

I'm making a formal commitment here that I'm willing to unconditionally support her financially to complete her study. To our knowledge, the financial guarantee of studying in Australia is required to be a deposit of at least 6 months. However, a large part of our funds is occupied by the purchase of storefronts and new equipment, so we're afraid that we are not able to meet your requirement on the financial guarantee. Therefore, we have applied for a student loan of RMB 600,000 Yuan to Anshan Branch of Bank of China by mortgaging our house property and storefronts, and the application has been approved officially. With the notification of student loan of studying abroad they offered, our child's studying abroad can be guaranteed financially now.

Now I officially declare that:
I fully approve of my stepdaughter's studying in Australia, and I will guarantee all the expenditure of her during her study period in Australia, including the tuition fee, living expense and other expenses. Meanwhile, I agree that her mother goes to Australia to be her guardian, in order to keep her on the right track, and I sincerely hope that she could find her own position in life.

Answer 2

唉。。写了半天觉得还是楼上写得好