Question

中翻英 几句话请求帮忙翻译

我要写一封email给要一位美国教授：A教授你好，我是一名大学四年级的学生，我希望能得到你的帮助，请您修改我的英语作文，以提高我的英文水平，谢谢

Answer 1

Dear Professor:
My name is XXX,I am a senior student from China.Do you feel that you have any time to take a look at my essay and give me some advice.Any advice will be highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely
XXX
不过是按照原文稍微翻译了一下，个人觉得原文还要做一下修改，态度要更加诚恳一点，多介绍一下自己，自己的想法和目的，最好是就自己写的作文来讲，会比较好一点。
比方说作文是邮件的附件，所以在正文中还要加上（如附件）之类，反正原文一定得改。
希望能帮到你！

Answer 2

按你的意思写了，但具体语句不相同，是按外国人的习惯写的
Hi Professor XXX

I’m a fourth year student in college. I wonder if you can take a look at my English essay and give some advice on modification to help me improve my English level.

Thank you very much!

Answer 3

want to write A letter of email to an American professor: A professor good-day, I was A university four grade's student, I hope I can get your help, please change my English composition, in order to improve my English level