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请帮我查找一下这段话中的语法错误并改正,谢谢大家的帮助,我急用

The advertisement is set in a family. A woman is in the couch and watching TV. She wants her husband to pick up some snacks. When her husband open the cabinet, a lot of snacks fly off to him face. On this time, you will find that man have a innocent facial expression , he did not hand to grab those M & M, he just tell them inside to his bowl, but the M & M told the man, you go inside to the bowl. When the screen turned to the M & M, you will find that there is not just a simple M & M,they are have life, each of them manually took different things, such as, the blue to take the jar, the red to get the bread, orange take biscuits, and yellow to get the banana. At the same time, the M & M have made a throwing motion, if the man close to them, they will handle anything thrown to the man.

This advertisement should be for the children and women. Because both the children and women, when they see these M & M, they will feel they are so cute, because you will find four M & M has four different expressions,and different action, so when momen and children saw this advertisement. they very pay more attention for this advertisement.

After that, when big M & M headline coming, all people will agree that this advertisement is over, but not, you will find a big red M & M into the yellow bowl, and the red M & M to see is very cute. you will find when the red M & M into the front of her, she was very happy. This also shows that M & M should be good to eat for the snack.

Finally,This advertisement do not have background music, but they amplification sound for someting. Such as bread, banana, and box . when we did not see M & M, It will make people to think, what in the cupboard. This advertisement is very close to life, because when Monday to Friday, people used to go to work, when the rest of the time, people usually stay at home, watching TV, eating snacks, especially the picture of a woman siting in the couch and watch TV, eat Snacks. This picture is easy to resonate with the audience.

Answer 1

改正如下：
The advertisement is set in a family. A woman is in the couch and watching TV. She wants her husband to pick up some snacks. When her husband open the cabinet, a lot of snacks fly off to his face. At this time, you will find that man has a innocent facial expression , he did not hand to grab those M & M, he just tell them inside his bowl, but the M & M told the man, you go inside to the bowl. When the screen turned to the M & M, you will find that there is not just a simple M & M,they are alive, each of them manually took different things, such as, the blue to took the jar, the red went to get the bread,the orange took biscuits, and the yellow went to get the banana. At the same time, the M & M have made a throwing motion, if the man get close to them, they will handle anything thrown to the man.

This advertisement should be made for the children and women. Because when either children or women see these M & M, they will have the feeling that they are so cute, because they will find four M & M has four different expressions,and different action, so when women and children saw this advertisement. they're very glad to pay more attention for this advertisement.

After that, when big M & M headline coming, all people will agree that this advertisement is over, but not, you will find a big red M & M into the yellow bowl, and the red M & M seems very cute. you will find when the red M & M into the front of her, she was very happy. This also shows that M & M should be good to eat for the snack.

Finally,This advertisement does not have background music, but they amplification sound for someting. Such as bread, banana, and box . when we did not see M & M, It will make people think, what is in the cupboard. This advertisement is very close to life, because from Monday to Friday, people always have to go to work, in the rest of the time, people usually stay at home, watching TV, eating snacks, especially the picture of a woman siting in the couch and watching TV, eating Snacks. This picture is easy to resonate with the audience.