Question

英文小作文 求高人看看有不有错误

Hello,erevyone!Do you konw me ? You don't konw ? Well,please read my English composition
I never go to school by plane. I seldom play sports .Because I am fat .I sometimes listen to music. I like math and English very much.So I often read math and English book.I usually do my homework. I always go to school on weekdays
Do you konw me ? I think you konw
如果有错误 请高人指出来并帮我改正一下 感谢至极 另外 我初中一年级
老师给的作业是用never sometimes usually often always 写作文

Answer 1

Hello,erevyone!（everyone 好像你打错了）Do you konw me ?（知道 是 know，不是 konw，还有作“了解”讲的时候一般用 know about） You don't konw ?（这里的 know 可以去掉） Well,please read my English composition（这里改为 read on 更加符合句意：“继续读下去吧！”）
I never go to school by plane. I seldom play sports .Because I am fat .（because 不可以单独成句，因为那是一个从句）I sometimes listen to music. （sometimes 在这里放在句首较为恰当）I like math and English very much.So I often read math and English book.（这里应该是 books 吧，而且 so 一般不用断一句）I usually do my homework. （这句话什么意思？经常写作业？还是“经常有作业要做”？如果是后者，改为 I usually have a lot of homework to do）I always go to school on weekdays（这里要用 weekday，单数，weekdays 是副词，“在平日”的意思）
Do you konw me ? I think you konw （这里为了句意连贯，应当加一个 now，“你现在知道了”）

Hello everyone! Do you know about me? You don't? Well, please read on, then.
I never go to school by plane. I seldom play sports, because I am fat. Sometimes I listen to music. I like Math and English very much, so I often read Math and English books. I usually have a lot of homework to do. I always go to school on weekday.
Do you know about me? You do now. （这里 do 代指 know about）

Answer 2

正确答案：
Hello,erevyone（everyone）!Do you konw（know） me ? You don't konw（know） ? Well,please read my English composition:
I never go to school by plane. I seldom play sports because I am fat .I sometimes listen to music. I like math and English very much,so I often read math and English book.I usually do my homework (at home). I always go to school on weekdays.
Do you konw（know） me ? I think you konw（know）.
括号里是改正~

Answer 3

Hi everyone! Do you want to know more about me, don't you?
Well, please read this passage, it is about myself.
I never go to school by plane. (我从来不搭飞机去上课) I seldom play sports because I am fat. I listen to music sometimes during my leisure time. I like study English and Mathematics very much. Because of that, I often read books related with Maths and also English Language books. I do my homework consistently, and I attend my school every weekdays without skipping it.
Do you know me now? I think you do.

Answer 4

I seldom play sports 中没有play sports这种用法 可以改为do exercises

后面的because不能单独成句 要和上面的句子放一起 用逗号连接

其他没语法错误了

追问

结尾可以改为 Now , Do you konw me？吗

追答

建议改为 Do you know more about me now?更好