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英语高手帮帮忙，帮我翻译一下这篇PS，非常感谢！（不要用机器翻译）能给的只有这点分了！

也许在大多数人眼中，这项暑期交流活动只是一次出国游学，一次满足好奇心的旅行。但对我来说这样的活动的意义却远非游学如此简单，我把它当作是人生一次难得的机遇和经历！在我看来，这次活动为每一个参与者打开了一闪思想的窗户，架起一座沟通的桥梁。不仅使我们有机会了解USC这所 有着悠久和光辉历史的世界名校，感受它的校园文化，更深层次的意义在于为我们提供一次亲身感受美国大学严谨诚信学术氛围和创新思维，对比差异深刻反思的机会。因此我更愿意将这次游学称为一次思想的旅行。
我的父亲是一位商人，经历过父亲失业的低潮并一路走来等到了最后的成功。母亲是一位医生，她总能用关爱和执着给濒临绝望的病人治疗下去的勇气。深受父母亲影响对我也形成了执着、坚韧和目光高远的性格。这使我总能在想要放弃时坚持最初的理想！从小我就对电子科技感兴趣，我也立下目标将来做一名电子工程师。一步一步经历重重选拔，最终进入了现在我所在的学校—XXX。在大学的三年里，我丝毫不敢懈怠，因为我深深懂得懈怠就意味着将来会被社会淘汰。我努力提高自己各方面的能力。我为自己制订了详细的学习计划，循序渐进，在学习好本专业知识的同时还不断扩充自己的知识储备，扩大自己知识范围。合理的学习计划安排也为我带了优异的成绩，我的综合成绩排名专业前10%，并数次获得奖学金。对于参加这次暑期交流，良好的英语能力是必不可少的，很庆幸，自己对英语学习一直都很重视，顺利通过大学英语四六级考试。此外，我还利用闲暇时间看一些英语原声电影来提高自己的听说能力。而在中国学生普遍薄弱的时间能力方面，我也努力是自己做到最好，我所学的电子专业对实践能力要求很高。学校为我们提供了诸如金工实习(metalworking practice)、电装实习（electrical engineering practice）等实践机会。同时也举办了“星火杯”这样的电子制作比赛，初次参赛后就获得了二等奖给了我很大鼓励。随着实践技能的提高，我开始向更高的目标迈进，现在我正在参加全国大学生电子设计大赛。利用假期时间，我还参加了就业形势调查等社会实践。
对于这次暑期交流，我充满希望和期待。如果有幸最终参与到这项活动中，那必将极大推动我未来的发展！
明天就要交了，很急！！

Answer 1

也许在大多数人眼中，这项暑期交流活动只是一次出国游学，一次满足好奇心的旅行。
Maybe in most people's eyes, the summer exchange activities just once to travel abroad, once satisfy curiosity trip.

但对我来说这样的活动的意义却远非游学如此简单，我把它当作是人生一次难得的机遇和经历！
But to me the meaning of such activity is far from travel so simple, I took it as life is a rare opportunity and experience!

在我看来，这次活动为每一个参与者打开了一闪思想的窗户，架起一座沟通的桥梁。
In my opinion, this activity for each participant opened a flash of thought window, build up a communication bridge.

不仅使我们有机会了解USC这所 有着悠久和光辉历史的世界名校，感受它的校园文化，更深层次的意义在于为我们提供一次亲身感受美国大学严谨诚信学术氛围和创新思维，对比差异深刻反思的机会。
Not only enable us to have the opportunity to understand the USC this has a long and glorious history of world-famous universities, feel it campus culture, deeper significance is to provide once we feel personally American university rigorous academic atmosphere and integrity of innovative thinking, comparative differences profound reflection of opportunities.

因此我更愿意将这次游学称为一次思想的旅行。
So I prefer to this study called time ideological trip.

我的父亲是一位商人，经历过父亲失业的低潮并一路走来等到了最后的成功。
My father is a businessman, experienced father unemployment low and walked all the way to the final success.

母亲是一位医生，她总能用关爱和执着给濒临绝望的病人治疗下去的勇气。
Mother is a doctor and she can always use love and dedication to is on the verge of despair of patients with the treatment of courage.

深受父母亲影响对我也形成了执着、坚韧和目光高远的性格。
By parental effect to I also formed a persistent, perseverance, and set your sights high character.

这使我总能在想要放弃时坚持最初的理想！
It makes me can always wanted to quit, sticking to the original ideal!

从小我就对电子科技感兴趣，我也立下目标将来做一名电子工程师。
Ever since I was little electronic technology, interested, I also has a target in the future do an electronic engineer.

一步一步经历重重选拔，最终进入了现在我所在的学校—XXX。
Step by step, and finally experience heavy selection into the now I school - XXX.

在大学的三年里，我丝毫不敢懈怠，因为我深深懂得懈怠就意味着将来会被社会淘汰。
In the university three years, I don't dare negligent, for I deeply understand laches means will be social eliminated.

我努力提高自己各方面的能力。
I try to improve your various aspects ability.

我为自己制订了详细的学习计划，循序渐进，在学习好本专业知识的同时还不断扩充自己的知识储备，扩大自己知识范围。
I made a detailed plan of study, step-by-step, in learning the professional knowledge of in the meantime also constantly expanding knowledge reserves and expand their knowledge scope.

合理的学习计划安排也为我带了优异的成绩，我的综合成绩排名专业前10%，并数次获得奖学金。
Reasonable arrangement plan of study for I brought good results and the comprehensive professional achievements rank the top 10%, and several times won the scholarship.

对于参加这次暑期交流，良好的英语能力是必不可少的，很庆幸，自己对英语学习一直都很重视，顺利通过大学英语四六级考试。
To attend this summer communication, good English ability is indispensable, glad, oneself for English learning has been very seriously, passed college English test band 4 and band 6.

此外，我还利用闲暇时间看一些英语原声电影来提高自己的听说能力。
In addition, I also use leisure time to watch some English movies to improve their listening and speaking ability.

而在中国学生普遍薄弱的时间能力方面，我也努力是自己做到最好，我所学的电子专业对实践能力要求很高。
While in China students generally weak time ability, I strive to do your best, is what I learned to electronic professional practice ability demanding.

学校为我们提供了诸如金工实习(metalworking practice)、电装实习（electrical engineering practice）等实践机会。
The school provides us with such as metalworking practice (different), metalworking practice (electrical engineering denso different) practices such opportunities.

同时也举办了“星火杯”这样的电子制作比赛，初次参赛后就获得了二等奖给了我很大鼓励。
Also held "xinghuo" cup such electronic manufacture game, first entry to obtain the second prize gave me great encouragement.

随着实践技能的提高，我开始向更高的目标迈进，现在我正在参加全国大学生电子设计大赛。
With the improvement of practical skills, I began to a higher goal, now I are participating in the national student electronics designing competition.

利用假期时间，我还参加了就业形势调查等社会实践。
Use holiday time, I have attended employment situation investigation, social practice.

对于这次暑期交流，我充满希望和期待。
For this summer a communication, I hope and expectation.

如果有幸最终参与到这项活动中，那必将极大推动我未来的发展！
If you're lucky enough to eventually to take part in this activity, it will greatly pushed my future development!

Answer 2

Maybe in most people's eyes, the summer exchange activities just once to travel abroad, once satisfy curiosity trip. But to me the meaning of such activity is far from travel so simple, I took it as life is a rare opportunity and experience! In my opinion, this activity for each participant opened a flash of thought window, build up a communication bridge. Not only enable us to have the opportunity to understand the USC this has a long and glorious history of world-famous universities, feel it campus culture, deeper significance is to provide once we feel personally American university rigorous academic atmosphere and integrity of innovative thinking, comparative differences profound reflection of opportunities. So I prefer to this study called time ideological trip.
My father is a businessman, experienced father unemployment low and walked all the way to the final success. Mother is a doctor and she can always use love and dedication to is on the verge of despair of patients with the treatment of courage. By parental effect to I also formed a persistent, perseverance, and set your sights high character. It makes me can always wanted to quit, sticking to the original ideal! Ever since I was little electronic technology, interested, I also has a target in the future do an electronic engineer. Step by step, and finally experience heavy selection into the now I school - XXX. In the university three years, I don't dare negligent, for I deeply understand laches means will be social eliminated. I try to improve your various aspects ability. I made a detailed plan of study, step-by-step, in learning the professional knowledge of in the meantime also constantly expanding knowledge reserves and expand their knowledge scope. Reasonable arrangement plan of study for I brought good results and the comprehensive professional achievements rank the top 10%, and several times won the scholarship. To attend this summer communication, good English ability is indispensable, glad, oneself for English learning has been very seriously, passed college English test band 4 and band 6. In addition, I also use leisure time to watch some English movies to improve their listening and speaking ability. While in China students generally weak time ability, I strive to do your best, is what I learned to electronic professional practice ability demanding. The school provides us with such as metalworking practice (different), metalworking practice (electrical engineering denso different) practices such opportunities. Also held "xinghuo" cup such electronic manufacture game, first entry to obtain the second prize gave me great encouragement. With the improvement of practical skills, I began to a higher goal, now I are participating in the national student electronics designing competition. Use holiday time, I have attended employment situation investigation, social practice.
For this summer a communication, I hope and expectation. If you're lucky enough to eventually to take part in this activity, it will greatly pushed my future development!

Answer 3

Maybe in most people's eyes, the summer exchange activities just once to travel abroad, once satisfy curiosity trip. But to me the meaning of such activity is far from travel so simple, I took it as life is a rare opportunity and experience! In my opinion, this activity for each participant opened a flash of thought window, build up a communication bridge. Not only enable us to have the opportunity to understand the USC this has a long and glorious history of world-famous universities, feel it campus culture, deeper significance is to provide once we feel personally American university rigorous academic atmosphere and integrity of innovative thinking, comparative differences profound reflection of opportunities. So I prefer to this study called time ideological trip. My father is a businessman, experienced father unemployment low and walked all the way to the final success. Mother is a doctor and she can always use love and dedication to is on the verge of despair of patients with the treatment of courage. By parental effect to I also formed a persistent, perseverance, and set your sights high character. It makes me can always wanted to quit, sticking to the original ideal! Ever since I was little electronic technology, interested, I also has a target in the future do an electronic engineer. Step by step, and finally experience heavy selection into the now I school - XXX. In the university three years, I don't dare negligent, for I deeply understand laches means will be social eliminated. I try to improve your various aspects ability. I made a detailed plan of study, step-by-step, in learning the professional knowledge of in the meantime also constantly expanding knowledge reserves and expand their knowledge scope. Reasonable arrangement plan of study for I brought good results and the comprehensive professional achievements rank the top 10%, and several times won the scholarship. To attend this summer communication, good English ability is indispensable, glad, oneself for English learning has been very seriously, passed college English test band 4 and band 6. In addition, I also use leisure time to watch some English movies to improve their listening and speaking ability. While in China students generally weak time ability, I strive to do your best, is what I learned to electronic professional practice ability demanding. The school provides us with such as metalworking practice (different), metalworking practice (electrical engineering denso different) practices such opportunities. Also held "xinghuo" cup such electronic manufacture game, first entry to obtain the second prize gave me great encouragement. With the improvement of practical skills, I began to a higher goal, now I are participating in the national student electronics designing competition. Use holiday time, I have attended employment situation investigation, social practice. For this summer a communication, I hope and expectation. If you're lucky enough to eventually to take part in this activity, it will greatly pushed my future development! (这样够了）

Answer 4

Perhaps in the majority person eyes, this summer exchange event is only a study abroad studies away from home, a satisfied curiosity travel. But for me such activity's significance actually far from studies away from home so simply, I treat as it am a life rare opportunity and the experience! In my opinion, as soon as this activity opened for each participant dodged the thought window, built a communication the bridge. Not only enables us to have the opportunity to understand that USC this is possessing glorious and the glory history world well-known colleges and universities, feels its campus culture, the deeper level's significance lies in for us provides one time feels the American University rigorous good faith academic atmosphere and the innovative idea by oneself, the contrast difference profound resonsideration opportunity. Therefore I am willing this time to study away from home am called a time thought the travel. my father is a merchant, has experienced the ebb tide which and a group the father is unemployed walks has waited till the final success. The mother is a doctor, the courage which she can always use to show loving concern with rigid for borders on despairs the patient who treats. The depth is affected the parents to me has also formed rigid, tenacious and the vision lofty disposition. This enables me always when the wish gives up insists the initial ideal! I am interested since childhood to the electronic technology, I will also establish the goal to be an electronic engineer in the future. The experience layer on layer selects gradually, entered school which - XXX now finally I am. In university's three years, I do not dare to idle, because I understood deeply will idle means in the future by the social selection. I enhance oneself various aspects diligently ability. I for my have drawn up the detailed learning program, proceeds in an orderly way, while studies this specialized knowledge also unceasingly to expand own knowledge reserve, expands oneself knowledge scope. The reasonable learning program arrangement also had the outstanding result for me, my comprehensive result place specialized first 10%, and obtained the scholarship several times. Regarding participates this time summer exchanges, good English ability is essential, rejoiced very much, oneself very much has taken seriously to English study, smoothly through university English 46 levels of tests. In addition, I also using the leisure time looked that some English original sound movie enhances own hears ability. But in the Chinese student universal weak time ability aspect, my also endeavor is achieves well, I study the electronic specialty is very high to the practical ability request. The school has provided such as the metalwork practice for us (metalworking practice), the light display practice (electrical engineering practice) and so on practice opportunities. Simultaneously has also conducted “the spark cup” such electronic manufacture competition, after primary participation, won the second prize prize to give me to encourage very greatly. Along with the practice skill's enhancement, I start to a higher goal to make great strides forward, now I am attending the national university student electron design big game. Using the vacation time, I also participated in social practices and so on employment situation investigation. Regarding this time summer exchanges, I hopful and anticipation. If participates in finally fortunately this activity, that will certainly to promote my future development enormously

Answer 5

嗯。。。我试试吧。。 你现在还需要么？

追问

恩，要的，谢谢！

追答

Maybe most people consider this summer exchange activity just as a visit abroad for study or a trip to satisfy my curiosity. But the significance of this activity is far from that, I take it as a rare opportunity and experience in my life! As far as I see it, this activity opened a window for thought, built up a bridge of communication for each participant. It not only enables us to get a close understand of the USC, which is a world-famous university with a long and glorious history , to feel its campus culture。 what’s more, it also provides us a opportunity to experience American university’s rigorous and integrity academic atmosphere and innovative thinking in person and to compare the differences and rethink profoundly. So I prefer to call this study as a ideological trip.你先看看可以不 如果行的话我再继续翻 毕竟水平有限啊

追问

你要是不忙的话，尽量全翻译了吧！我对比一下，再结合自己综合一下！

追答

。。。我现在有点事 不过今天晚上一定弄好