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todayissunkay.theweatheriswarm.theieateafootballmatchbetweenclass1andclass2.thegameis... today is sunkay. the weather is warm.
theie ate a football match between class 1 and class 2.
the game is wonderful ! the students are very bored.
at last,class 1 win tge game.
the students in class 2 feels sad.
在中间找出错的,并改过来。非常感谢。
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楼上词语改对了,但是这应该是篇记,应该用一般过去式,把谓语都改了

today was sunday,the weather was warm.there was a football match between class 1 and class 2.the game was wonderful! the students were very bored(此剧zhong感到厌烦的 ,无聊的,烦人的 貌似不恰) .at last ,class 1 won the game.the students in class 2 felt sad.

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today is sunkay(改为sunday),the weather is warm.theie ate(改为there is ) a football match between class 1 and class 2.the game is wonderful! the students are very bored(我觉得此处应改为excited,应为比赛是wonderful,所以不应该bored).at last ,class 1 win tge(改为the) game.the students in class 2 feels(改为feel) sad.
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