Question

翻译成英文，人工+无语法错误

08年的时候，我的家乡四川发生了地震。因此看到日本地震的新闻，我非常难过。希望招生办公室的各位老师注意安全。虽然我提交的雅思成绩不高，但我现在在努力学习英语，相信我能达到这个项目所需要的英语水平。我是非常想参加这个项目，希望我能够被录取。
如果录取结果会延期公布，我想再提交一次雅思成绩，证明我英语的进步。
最后祝愿日本平安，日本人民平安。

Answer 1

08, my hometown, sichuan, the earthquake happened. Therefore see Japan earthquake news, I am very sad. Hope in the admissions office of fellow teachers pay attention to safety. Although I submit ielts score is not high, but now I'm trying to learn English, I believe I could reach the project need English level. I am really want to take part in this project, I hope I can be accepted.
If admitted results will postpone announced, I want to submit a ielts scores, proof of my English progress.
Finally I wish Japanese peace, peace to the Japanese people.

Answer 2

In 2008, my hometown Sichuan occurred an earthquake . So at the news of the earthquake in Japan make me feel very sad. I hopes that all teachers in the Admissions Office pay attention for safety. Although I submit IELTS results is not high, but I am trying hardly to learn English, I believe I can achieve this standard of English required for the project. I hope very much to participate in this project, I hope I can be admitted.
If the admission results are extended announced, I would like to submit an IELTS to prove my English progress.
Finally, I wishes peace for Japan and for their people