Question

翻译成英文，人工+无语法错误

08年的时候，我的家乡四川发生了地震。因此看到日本地震的新闻，我非常难过。希望招生办公室的各位老师注意安全。虽然我提交的雅思成绩不高，但我现在在努力学习英语，相信我能达到这个项目所需要的英语水平。我是非常想参加这个项目，希望我能够被录取。
如果录取结果会延期公布，我想再提交一次雅思成绩，证明我英语的进步。
最后祝愿日本平安，日本人民平安。

Answer 1

In 2008，earthquake occured in Sichuan, my hometown. So I am very sad when I saw the news about Japan earthquake. I wish that teachers of Admission Offices all take care of themselves. Although my IELES score is not very high, I really work at English right now. I believe my Englishi proficiency will meet the requirement of this project. I'm eager to take part in this project. I hope I could be accepted.
If the admission result is postponed making public, I want to take part in IELES exams again to prove my impovement of English proficiency.
Finally, wish Japan and Japanese people safe and sound.

Answer 2

In 2008, there was an earthquake that took place near my hometown in Sichuan. Therefore, I felt very sorry when I saw the news about the quake in Japan. I sincerely hope that everyone in the admission office would really watch out and stay safe. Although the IELTS score I submitted was not very high, I have been studying English really hard since then. I am positive I'll be able to attain the level of proficiency required by this project. I am really looking forward to participating in this project, and I hope I could be accepted.
If by chance the admission results will not be announced as scheduled, I do wish to resubmit my IELTS score to prove the progress I made in English.
At last, I would like to wish Japan well, and the same to the Japanese people.

注：招生办的各位“老师” ... 国外没有这种尊称所有人为“老师”的习惯，因此我只以“大家”（everyone) 替代。其他也有些句子略为修改了一下，避免出现“汉化英语”的窘况。

Answer 3

In 2008,there was also an earthquake in my hometown Sichuan.So when I see the report about the earthquake in Japan,I felt so sad.I hope the teachears in the admissions office will watch out .Although my IELTS lever is not high,I am working hard on it,I believe I can make it throught.I want to join this test and hope I can will be admitted.
If the announcement of admission results will be delayed,I want to submit my scores again,so that I can prove my progress in English.
At last,I will all the Japanese will be safe

Answer 4

in 2008, a terrible earthquake happend in Sichuan which is my hometown. Therefore, I am very sad when i heard the news that Janpan has surfed such a horrible earthquake. i wish all the teachers in the admissions office would take care of yourselves. Although my last IELTS Score is not very good, but i have been trying hard to learn English after then, i'm sure i can reach your current English level for the programme. i desperately want to jion in your project, i hope that i can be accepted. if the announcement of the acceptance result will be putt off, i'd like to hand in a second IELTS Score in order to improve my progress in English.
Thanks for your time.
Best wishes to Japan and Janpanese, may all of you peace.

纯手工翻译哦。。。如有不妥的地方你再改改吧。。。

Answer 5

08年的时候，我的家乡四川发生了地震。
In 2008 , an earthquake has occurred in my hometown , Sichuan province .
因此看到日本地震的新闻，我非常难过。
Thus I feel rather upset hearing the earthquake in Japan.
希望招生办公室的各位老师注意安全。
And I hope all the Admissions Office teachers there will be safety.
虽然我提交的雅思成绩不高，但我现在在努力学习英语，相信我能达到这个项目所需要的英语水平。
Even though I am not excellent in IELTS, I am trying my best effort to learn English, thus to reach the level which required by this project.
我是非常想参加这个项目，希望我能够被录取。
I want to join in this project very much , and hope that I could luckily be accepted.
如果录取结果会延期公布，我想再提交一次雅思成绩，证明我英语的进步。
If the admission results announcement date wiil be delayed , I would like to submit a futher IELTS mark and to show my improvement in English.
最后祝愿日本平安，日本人民平安。
Finally, I give best wishes to Japan and hope everyone will be safe there.

这是全文：In 2008 , an earthquake has occurred in my hometown , Sichuan province . Thus I feel rather upset hearing the earthquake in Japan.And I hope all the Admissions Office teachers there will be safety.Even though I am not excellent in IELTS, I am trying my best effort to learn English, thus to reach the level which required by this project. I want to join in this project very much , and hope that I could luckily be accepted.
If the admission results announcement date wiil be delayed , I would like to submit a futher IELTS mark and to show my improvement in English.
Finally, I give best wishes to Japan and hope everyone will be safe there.

Answer 6

my hometown taked a earthquark 08,so i feel very sad when i konw what happend in japan.
the teachers of recruit students offfice should take care youself. though my YASI grade is not very good , i am learning english very hard ,and i believe that i will make a big progress .
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