Question

英语纠错及翻译

Microsoft’soperating systems and software In the change andinfluence the defining of our life. And pulled close distance of the world. Letcomputer walked into people’s lives

这段话是否有语法，拼写，标点符号等 之类的错误。。以及求帮忙翻一下

Answer 1

很多错。修改如下：
Microsoft’s operating systems and software have influenced and changed the definition of our life, and closer the distance between us and the world.Let the computer came into people's life.
微软的操作系统和软件已经影响并且改变了我们对生活的定义,拉近了我们和世界的距离。让电脑进入人们的生活。
这是我理解的中文，不知道和你想的有没有出入。

Answer 2

A professor gave a exam one day to his students.
He handed out all the papers and went back to his desk and wait.
Later the test was over and all the students handed the exam paper back in.
The professor noticed that one of the students had attached a $100 bill to his paper with a note saying "A dollar per point."
On the next class the professor handed out the graded exam papers.
This student got back his paper graded 59 with $64 change.

一天学生们参加考试。
发完试卷，教授就回到讲台。
考完了，学生把试卷交回。
教授发现一位同学附了张100美元在试卷上，旁边的字条写着“一美元买一分”。
第二次课，卷子发下来。
这个学生拿到他的59分试卷还有教授找回的64美元。

这个故事我听过,记忆中大致是以上，英语部分也作了点修改。仅供参考。
是否可以解决您的问题？