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The purpose of this research is to analysis the application of the ISG(Index of Streetscape Greenness) in EIA through case study of Seoul. ISG is a new index which directly expresses human's perceptions of plants in a street and is defined as the area ratio of which leaves of plants occupy an eye-level view of a person standing on the center line of a street. In this research the 42 cases of 3 step reports such as plans, drafts, and final reports which had been passed through the EIA procedure of Seoul were analyzed. The results are as follows:
In the drafts frequent mistakes or errors such as unsuitable picture composition, unsuitable sample points, inconsistency of the simulation result with the planting plan, and insufficient numbers of analysis were found, but almost of them were corrected in the final reports. In the most of final reports, the 30% of minimum requirement was satisfied. At all cases the changes of the ISG values were clearly positive. Finally the average current ISG was 19.6%, meanwhile the average proposed ISG was 35.4%. It was verified that the ISG is very practical index to promote green streetscape, but in order to guarantee an achievement a thorough investigation of reports are needed.
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Answer 1

这个研究的目的，是分析EIA（环境影响评价）中ISG（街景绿化指数）的在首尔个案中的应用。ISG是一个新的指标，直接表明人类对街道上植物的认知，定义为个体站在街道正中央时，植物的叶子占据人视野水平的面积比率。在这个研究中，三个阶段共计42份报告，包括计划、草稿以及最终报告，都通过首尔EIA程序进行分析。结果如下：
从草稿中发现，常见的错误包括不恰当的构图，不合适的样本点，种植计划的模拟结果不一致，以及分析数量不足等，但在最终报告中，绝大多数都被修正了。多数最终报告表明，最低要求的30%即能满足条件。所有的个案都表明，ISG值的改变是积极正向的。最终通用的ISG指数平均为19.6%，同时建议的ISG指数平均为35.4%。经证实，ISG指标是实用于促进街道绿化，但仍需要更加严密的调查研究，才能保证成效。

Answer 2

这项研究的目的是分析的应用的街道景观绿化ISG(指数)环境影响评价中,通过个案研究首尔。ISG是一种新型的指数,这直接表现人的感知的植物在一条街,被定义为面积比率的叶子的植物占据着eye-level观点对一个人站在中线街道。在这项研究中,有3项符合的一步的42例(42眼)报告,如计划、票据和最终报告已经经过环评程序首尔进行了分析。结果如下:

在汇票频繁的错误,如不合适的构图,不合适的样本点、不一致性的数值模拟结果与种植计划,并发现了足够数量的分析,但他们大多纠正在最后的报告。在大多数的最终报告,30%的最低要求是满意的。在所有的情况下的变化值,无疑是积极的。问题最后,平均电流,同时该ISG是19.6%提出了平均ISG 35.4%。实例证明,ISG是非常实用指标推进绿色街道景观,但是为了保证这一成就一个详尽的调查报告是非常必要的。

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