Question

英语改错- 在线等

I cannot conceive education in a training in so many separate subjects. 81.___________________

Education is integral: it is encouragement of the growth of the whole man, 82. __________________

the complete man. It follows that it is not entire, nor even mainly, an affair 83. ___________________

of book learning, for what is only the education of one part of our nature – that 84._________________

part of the mind which deals with concept and abstractions. In the child, who is 85._________________

not yet mature enough to think by these shortcut methods, it should be large an 86. _________________

education of the senses – the sense of sight, touch and hearing: in one word, 87.___________________

the education of the sensibility. From this point of view there is valid 88.___________________

distinction between art and science: it is only the whole man with his diverse 89.__________________

interests and faculties, and the aim of education should be to develop all these to 90._________________

harmony and completeness.

Answer 1

1.第一个in 改为by 应该是“通过训练”的意思吧
2.逗号后面补上or 两个名词短语肯定不能这样并列，加个or表示或者。。
3.affair改为issue affair一般指私人事务什么的，感觉用在这里不太合适
4.what改为which for which 是限定性定语从句
5.child改为childhood
6.large后补上through 表示通过感觉教育（？）来使感觉更灵敏
7.one改为a in a word是固定搭配 ，总之的意思
8.valid改为clear 清晰的区别 我觉得用clear比较合适
9.it改为that 这个不确定╮(╯▽╰)╭
10.第一个to去掉 感觉这里aim后面should是指虚拟语气

仅供参考噢^_^

Answer 2

感觉是机器翻译的东西，读着别扭呢

追问

要改错的诶。肯定别扭。

追答

一句话只有一个错误吗

追问

是的。