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帮忙修改一篇演讲稿（有底稿）

how Thanks giving 怎样感恩
The poet said: spring flowers to the door pushed open 。 i said: thanksgiving to the door pushed open the living. if you carefully listen to the voices of flowers, are everywhere harmonious life movement.
Then, as a middle school student, how thanksgiving?
First thanksgiving their parents, because everyone’s life is a continuation of the parents of one blood, all of the parents gave us love, let us enjoy the human world of affection and happiness, therefore, we would like to thank the parents.
Teachers are our growth, are our friends, teachers care for us , their words and deeds, let us benefit for life, we pay for teachers efforts and sweat, we should thanksgiving teachers.
Students study the lives of our fellow students to encourage each other, help each other, to jointly overcome difficulties and setbacks, the common taste of success and happiness learning, we should be grateful for every day and we accompanied the students.
Thanksgiving-fighting, thanksgiving unlimited! students, and society thanksgiving! let us always to the life caring and full of love and love!
修改成初一水平，2分钟长度，难的一些地方做修改，要参加演讲。
这篇太难了 请求帮助
谢谢
是改简单些 删去一些难句

Answer 1

The true meaning of Thanks Giving
Once a poet said, the door pushed open to the spring flowers. Today, I said, the door pushed open to the sincere gratitude. If you listen carefully, the voice of thanks are everywhere, filling every movement of this harmonious life.
Thus, to us, we middle school students, how and to whom should we give our gratitude?
First of all, give it to our dear parents. It was them who gave their blood and life to us, bringing us to this wonderful world. It was them who gave their affection and love to us, enabling us to enjoy all the happiness. It was them to whom we, their children, should give our greatest gratitude.
Then, the teachers. During our growth and education, they care for us, guide for us, teach us right from wrong. Their words and deeds become our priceless wealth. All they would appreciate was their pupils' hard working. We should also thank them by our best efforts.
After all, our fellow students. Everyday when we're together, we encourage each other, help each other and learn from each other. Together, we overcome difficulties and setbacks. Together, we enjoy success and happiness. Together, we acquire new knowledge and skills. So, be grateful for everyone around us and they deserve it that much!
Thanksgiving is only a one-day festival, but our gratitude to those who deserve it should never be limited or ended! Thank you! Thank you all! For letting this world filled with love! For letting this society better and better! Thank you all for listening!

Answer 2

帮忙修改一篇演讲稿（有底稿）

女人结婚之前必看内容！
小MM你好，
我的经历值得每位妹妹认真看一下，有许多经验教训。
每个女人都会有一些感情上纠结的事。
说下我的经历，对你可能会有借鉴意义。我在一次酒后失身了，那个男人不是我喜欢的，后来遇到一位非常喜欢我的男孩，但是他很传统。结果在第一次的时候因为我没见红，就和我分道扬镳了，我很郁闷，但也很无奈。
后来我在网上查找解决方法时，看到了一次性的人造chu女膜，说能百分百见红的，就买了回来，结果一测试，发现那个血色太假了，也没有敢用，在网上一查，发现许多MM买这个都上当了，很少有成功的。我还查阅了修复手术，发现有负作用，也不能确保见红，就没有去做。
后来幸好遇到一位这方面的咨询师，在她帮助下，我顺利过了这一关，老公对我非常好。
男人对这方面其实是很重视的，建议不要承认，承认了他的压力会很大，如果他过不了这一关，肯定会分手的。

如果有需要你可以加莫莫咨询师扣扣，前三位是{六}{4}{一}
，中间三位是{陆}{2}{零}
，最后三位是{柒扒}{八}
，她会指导你过这关的，她已经指导多位妹妹成功了。
如果你感觉我回答的不错，请选为最佳，谢谢你，最后祝你成功，早日摆脱纠结。
祝愿所有妹妹幸福一生，拥有自己的真爱。

Answer 3

Then, as a middle school student, how thanksgiving?
删除就好