Question

英语短文改错。急急急！

when i was in high school,most of my friend had bicycles.i hope i could also have it.one day i saw a second-hand bicycle,that was only one hundred yuan.i asked my father the money.but he said he could only give me half of money.he should find the other half myself.so i went to sell newspapers after the school.my father was pleased if i showed him the money a month after.he gives me the other fifty.you can imagine how much happy i was when irode to school on my own bicycle. 急急急急！谢谢了

Answer 1

第一行的 most of my friend 的 friend 应为 friends
i could also have it 的 it 应为 one
第二行的 that was only one 的that 应为 which
father the money 在 the 前加 for

Answer 2

most of my friends, .i hoped, have one i asked my father for the money.
你这好多的小错误。细心就会发现的。

Answer 3

a high , freinds, have one, which was only , for the money, when i showed him the money a month later,he gave me you could imagine how happy i was

Answer 4

most of my friends
hope -> hoped
,that -> , which
asked my father for the money
half the money
I should find
after school
if -> because
how happy I was

Answer 5

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