Question

英语改错十个：I am a senior high school student.

In my opinions,the classroom is a place for we students to gain knowledge.So quietness is bad needed for us to learn in the classroom.But recently some students has brought their mobile phones tu the classroom and we often hear of the ring of mobile phones .Some of them even wanted precious time in class type short messages on the mobile phones.To keep the classroom quiet and make us focused more on our studies ,I suggest that mobile phones be used in the classroom.At least ,they shouldn't be used where we are having a class .
大哥哥们，我英语什么都不会。谁英语好，帮忙给改一下。改了我还加分
我用的是手机。

Answer 1

二模吧?正确答案~1.opinions改成opinion 2.去掉we 3.bad改成badly 4.has改成have 5.hear of去掉of 6.wasted改成waste 7.type改成typing 8.focused改成focus 9.phonesbe后加not 10.where改成when

Answer 2

In my opinion,
for us students
is badly needed
students have brought
hear (of) the
even used precious
to type
and help us focus 2处
that no mobile phones
另外 tu 应该是打错字了吧

Answer 3

1.opinions 改为opinion
2.第一句中class前面的the去掉
3.第一句的we改为us
4.第二句的badly
5.brought to
6.heared
7to type
8phones后加should be not。
9.at least。
10.where改when。

Answer 4

1. In my opinion 2. for our students 3. knowledge, so 4. However, recently 5. students have brought 6.often hear the 7.ringtone 8.make us focuse 9.phones should not be used 10. while we are
这样?