英语短文改错as a senior three student,

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as a senior three student,it won^t take long after i graduate.now,i havemuch to share with my student.
firstly,i^d like to show my appreciation to those stand by me all the wa-y,teachers,parents and friends included without their help or advice,my li-ef will be different.secondly,it^s high time for i to say sorry to the cla-ssmates whom i hurt or misunderstood.i firm believe that communication andsmiles act as bridge to friendship.thirdly,i^ve made my mind to make every effort to study,for hard work is the key to a success.finally i want to exp-ress my hope which all the young fellows can make full use of time,becausetime and tide wait for no man.
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as a senior three student,it won^t take long 1 before i graduate.now,i havemuch to share with my 2students.
firstly,i^d like to show my appreciation to those 3who stand by me all the way,teachers,parents and friends included without their help or advice,my life 4would be different.secondly,it^s high time for 5 me to say sorry to the classmates whom i hurt or misunderstood.i 6firmly believe that communication and smiles act as bridge to friendship.thirdly,i^ve made 7 up my mind to make every effort to study,for hard work is the key to 8 success.finally i want to express my hope 9that all the young fellows can make full use of time,because time and tide wait for no man.
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你想表达什么?

是想说 学生跟老人一样多都是3个人的吗?

as 一般都是 比较用的。 可是你写的是一个老年人, 又是3个学生,不知道你想表达什么呢
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