英语短文改错。

Mikeisastudentinourclasswhosedoesn’tcareabouthisstudies.OnemorningMikewaslateforschoo... Mike is a student in our class whose doesn’t care about his studies. One morning Mike was late for school as usually, which made Miss Green, who teaches us the history, angry. Seeing that Miss Green was so angry, Mike said to him, “Excuse me for my coming late. I watch a football match in my dream.” It was no doubt that Miss Green didn’t Believe that Mike said, so she said, “How did it make you late?” Mike, who hesitated for a long time, saying, “Because neither team could win the game, the match lasted a few minute.” Hearing Mike’s answer to the teacher’s question, we all burst laughter. 展开
gracexiexin
2011-04-06 · 超过18用户采纳过TA的回答
知道答主
回答量:157
采纳率:0%
帮助的人:60.4万
展开全部
大概改好了=u=~
Mike is a student in our class who doesn't care about his studies. One morning Mike was late for school as usual, which made Miss Green, who teaches us history, angry. Seeing that Miss Green was so angry, Mike said to her, "Excuse me for my coming late. I watched a football match in my dream." It was no doubt that Miss Green didn't believe what Mike said, so she said, "How did it make you late?" Mike, who hesitated for a long time, said, "Because neither team could win the game, the match lasted a few more minutes." Hearing Mike's answer to the teacher's question, we all burst into laughter.
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
21Doreen
2011-04-06 · TA获得超过1163个赞
知道小有建树答主
回答量:182
采纳率:0%
帮助的人:227万
展开全部
Mike is a student in our class who doesn’t care about his studies. One morning Mike was late for school as usual, which made Miss Green, who teaches us the history, angry. Seeing that Mike said to her, “Excuse me for my coming late. I watch a football match in my dream.” It was no doubt that Miss Green didn't believe what Mike said, so she said, “How does it make you late?” Mike, who hesitated for a long time, saying, “Because neither team could win the game, the match lasted a few minutes.” Hearing Mike's answer , we all bursted into laughter.
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
百度网友576e3a7
2011-04-06
知道答主
回答量:13
采纳率:0%
帮助的人:10万
展开全部
Mike,who doesn’t care about his studies, is a student in our class . One morning, Mike was late for school as usua, and made Miss Green, who teaches us the history, angry.
Mike said to her, “I'm sorry for coming late. I watched a football match in my dream.” There was no doubt that Miss Green didn’t believe what Mike said, so she asked, “How did it make you late?” Mike,hesitated for a long time and answered , “Because neither of them could win the game, the match lasted a few more minutes.” Hearing Mike’s answer to the teacher’s question, we all burst out laughter.
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
君瑞王者
2011-04-06
知道答主
回答量:22
采纳率:0%
帮助的人:12.2万
展开全部
1 whose-who
2 usually-usual
3 the 去掉
4 him -her
5 watch-watched
6 it-there
7 believe that-believe what
8 saying-said
9 minute-minutes
10 brust laughter-brust into laughter
本回答被提问者采纳
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
zcmzsxy
2011-04-06 · TA获得超过3897个赞
知道小有建树答主
回答量:544
采纳率:0%
帮助的人:234万
展开全部
whose改为who
usually改为usual
去掉the history前的the
watch改为was watching
It was no doubt改为there was no doubt
that Mike said 改为what Mike said
burst 后面加into
已赞过 已踩过<
你对这个回答的评价是?
评论 收起
收起 更多回答(5)
推荐律师服务: 若未解决您的问题,请您详细描述您的问题,通过百度律临进行免费专业咨询

为你推荐:

下载百度知道APP,抢鲜体验
使用百度知道APP,立即抢鲜体验。你的手机镜头里或许有别人想知道的答案。
扫描二维码下载
×

类别

我们会通过消息、邮箱等方式尽快将举报结果通知您。

说明

0/200

提交
取消

辅 助

模 式