Question

英语翻译，力求准确力求完美，高手进来，翻译好的加分（严禁机器翻译）

在我的理解里，邓迪大学（The University of Dundee）是英国一所拥有相当悠久历史的大学。让我最心神向往莫过于它优美的风景以及浓厚的学习氛围和气息。
邓迪大学坐落于苏格兰的四大城市之一的邓迪市中心，邓迪市位于苏格兰的东海岸，依山傍水，景致迷人，这里的地理位置十分理想，去往苏格兰的大多数风景区以及历史名胜均十分便利，正如诺贝尔得主兼该校荣誉毕业生Seamus Heaney描述的一样，"having its head in the clouds and its feet firmly on the ground."。
邓迪大学从生命科学领域到设计领域在国际上都久享盛誉。学校图书馆藏书量在苏格兰各大学中名列第一，在全英大学中居前五位，能够提供很好的资源和读书环境。该校办学宗旨是提供一流的教学、科研和服务设施，使每一名学生在邓迪拓展其未来。
我很荣幸拥有这次联合培养项目的资格，我想申请的研究生课题方向是生物医学工程。这是该校的优势项目，也是当今世界上最热门的专业之一。生命科学神秘而令人向往，我愿以最热诚的心，最努力的态度投入这个贵校该专业的学习中去，希望能如愿以偿。

Answer 1

我们翻译的人都追求信达雅，我稍稍修改其中的句子，不一定直接翻译。打星的下面有注释
The University of Dundee is a British university with rich cultural history. The most appealing aspect is its gorgeous scenery and excellent learning environment.

The University is located downtown* Dundee, one of the largest cities in Scotland. Situated along the east coast, the city is surrounded by with beautiful mountain range and charming bodies of water. It also offers great convenience, with ease of access to many of Scotlands tourist attractions and historic locations. As described by Seamus Heaney, a school honorary member and Nobel laureate, [living in the city is like]*,"having its head in the clouds and its feet firmly on the ground.

University of Dundee enjoys internationally acclaimed reputation on many subjects from Life Science to Designing. The school housed the largest collection of academic books in all universities in Scotland and fifth among schools in the UK, providing excellent resources and studying environment for students. The Univeristy constantly strives to provide first-class teaching, invest in excellent facilities and research, and continually expand the horizon and establish progressive and dynamic outlook all Dundee student. *

I feel very privileged to have the opportunity for a joint training topic. I am hoping to apply biomedical engineering graduate study program, which is not only one of the most academically accredited programs and but also one of the hottest topics in the globe. I will apply my passion towards the mysterious and exciting field of Life Science with hard work if I am admitted in the program. I am hoping I may have this opportunity. *Thank you very much. I look forward to speaking with you soon .

Sincerely,

注释：
1*. downtown 前面不加介词，故为located downtown
2* 直接引用句子不通顺，[]等于中文报纸上有时候括号的补充解释
3* 稍微加了一些东西把学校描述得更美好，如果觉得不适合可不要
4*加一些礼貌上的客套话

一个小小的意见，我看到最后才知道你是要申请上这学校，这篇文章看起来更像学校简介。中国人讲话喜欢铺陈，讲一些好话然后说出本意。但是西方人更喜欢开门见山，先把重要的说出来。不知道英国的情况，我申请好些美加学校都是一开始先说我想上什么什么专业，然后说其他的。
还有一点就是，西方人的确会欣赏你的爱好和勤奋，但他们会更重视你的社会责任感。并不是很虚的什么报答社会报答党，而是你希望怎么样通过学这个专业去帮助更多有需要的人，这会给你加很多很多印象分。

你有什么问题再问吧，随时都行。祝你好运！

追问

谢谢你的帮助，收获很大。不过有些表达太中文化了有点别扭。

Answer 2

你急吗？不急的话，我早上起来帮你翻译，我先睡觉了。。。

追问

急，在线等……

追答

不好意思啊。。。我这里凌晨6点了。。必须睡了。。。我12点上来第一件事情帮你翻译好不？

追问

好的

追答

In my understanding, the University of Dundee is a long historical British University. The most wonderful thing attracting me is the strong study atmosphere and breath and its beautiful landscapes.
The university of Dundee located in the center of Dundee city, one of the four cities in Scotland, Dundee city is in the east coast of Scotland, scenery charming, It also has an excellent geographic position which could easily access most of the scenic spot and historical sites in Scotland, so convenient. As the Nobel Prize winners and the school honor graduate, Seamus Heaney described, "as having its head in the clouds and its firmly on the ground."
University of Dundee has a long historical high reputation range from life science to design field in international. The school library has No.1 book storage among universities in Scotland. Even comparing with all universities in UK, he is still in the top five. Because of his amazing library, he can provide excellent resources and reading environment. The goal of school is to provide the first-class teaching, research and service facilities, make every student to broaden its future in Dundee.
I'm so honored to have this opportunity in this joint training project, I'd like to apply for the qualification of graduate subject is biomedical engineering. This is the Dundee's one of the best programs. Also it is one of the hottest subjects in the world today. Life science is mysterious and yearning. I will with the most sincerely heart and hardest working attitude into Dundee's professional learning.

追问

谢谢你给的参考！

Answer 3

In my understanding, the University of Dundee (The University of Dundee) is a British university has a very long history. I yearn for the mind than its beautiful scenery and rich learning environment and atmosphere.
Dundee University is located in one of four major cities in Scotland Dundee City Centre, Dundee in Scotland, the East Coast, yard, charming scenery, where the location is ideal, most scenic areas of Scotland go and historic sites are very convenient, as the Nobel Laureate Seamus Heaney and honors graduate of the school as described, "having its head in the clouds and its feet firmly on the ground.".
University of Dundee to the design from the field of life sciences have long enjoyed international reputation. School library collection in Scotland, ranked first among universities in the UK top five universities, to provide good resources and school environment. The school mission is to provide first class teaching, research and service facilities, so that every student in Dundee to expand its future.
I am honored to have the qualifications of the joint training project, and I want to apply for the graduate program of biomedical engineering direction. This is the advantage of the school project, but also the world's most popular professional one. Life Sciences mysterious and desirable, I would like the most ardent heart, put the most effort for learning in your school to the professional, hoping to get it.

Answer 4

In my understanding, of The University of Dundee leads (Dundee) is a British have quite a long history of University. Let me most is yearning than it beautiful landscapes and strong study atmosphere and breath.
The university of Dundee located in one of the four cities in Scotland, Dundee in Scotland Dundee city downtown hangzhou, the east coast, scenery charming, here's the geography position is very ideal, most of the scenic spot to Scotland and historical sites are very convenient, as the Nobel Prize winners and Seamus Heaney describe the school honor graduate, "as having its head in the clouds and its firmly on the ground lilly-white.".
University of Dundee from life science to design field in international have long enjoys the high reputation. The school library in Scotland in the largest universities ranked first in UK universities, in the top five, can provide very good resources and reading environment. The school education aim is to provide the first-class teaching, research and service facilities, make every student to broaden its future in Dundee.
I'm honored to have the joint training project, I'd like to apply for the qualification of graduate subject direction is biomedical engineering. This is the school's advantage project in the world today, is one of the most popular professional. Life science mysterious and yearning, I wish with the most sincerely heart, hardest working attitude into the your school this professional learning, hope succeeded.

追问

不要机器翻译，谢谢！！！

Answer 5

In my understanding of The Dundee leads in Britain's a have a long history of University. Let me most is yearning than it beautiful landscapes and strong study atmosphere and breath.

The university of Dundee located in one of the four cities in Scotland, Dundee in Scotland Dundee city downtown hangzhou, the east coast, scenery charming, here's the geography position is very ideal, most of the scenic spot to Scotland and historical sites are very convenient, as the Nobel Prize winners and Seamus Heaney describe the school honor graduate, "as having its head in the clouds and its firmly on the ground lilly-white.".

University of Dundee from life science to design field in international have long enjoys the high reputation. The school library in Scotland in the largest universities ranked first in UK universities, in the top five, can provide very good resources and reading environment. The school education aim is to provide the first-class teaching, research and service facilities, make every student to broaden its future in Dundee.

I'm honored to have the joint training project, I'd like to apply for the qualification of graduate subject direction is biomedical engineering. This is the school's advantage project in the world today, is one of the most popular professional. Life science mysterious and yearning, I wish with the most sincerely heart, hardest working attitude into the your school this professional learning, hope succeeded.

追问

不要机器翻译好么……