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dear Rose,
i'm happy to write to you for the first time. you were introduced to myself by Mr johnson, my foreign teacherm because of I wanted to have a pen pal in your country. I hope we will be good friend.
my name is henry, student of senior 1 of No.2 Middle school of beijing. I would be seventeen years old this weekend. I likes sports very much,specially volleyball and tennis. Did you like volleyball and tennis? I an very interesting in American life and would like to know how American students lve at home and what his interests are .
I an looking forward to your letter

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Dear Rose,
I am very happy to write to you in the first time .You were introduced to me by Mr.joihson,my foreigh teacher, because that I wanted to have a penpal in your country. I hope we wil be good friends.
My name is Hery,who is a student of senior 1 in No.2 Middle School in Beijing. will be seventeen years old in this weekend. I like sport very much especially volleyball and tennis. Do you like volleyball and tennis? I am very interested in American life and I would like to know how is American students' life like and what their intereste are.
I am looking forward to your letter.
Yours.
Peter.
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