Question

求翻译这篇短文章（汉翻英）

爱。也需要距离
我不知道这样做是否正确
我只知道爱一个人并不一定要把她拥有
只要能存活在自己的心中
在记忆的时光里，拥有对方的笑容
那样已经足够……

有时候，抱得越紧，越难长久
因为……
爱。需要博大的心胸
爱。也需要自由的宽容

人世间，坎坷道路
命运之神，并不一定是永远的慈父
他只是在我们成功的背后
给予我们成功的欢乐
所以……
爱，更需要时间的磨练和坚定的考验……
希望能按照我汉语的那种格式 谢谢

Answer 1

爱。也需要距离
Love also needs to keep a certain distance.
我不知道这样做是否正确
I don't know whether it is right to do this.
我只知道爱一个人并不一定要把她拥有
I only know that to love her doesn't mean to occupy her.
只要能存活在自己的心中
Just to hold her in my heart,
在记忆的时光里，拥有对方的笑容
and to enjoy the smiles of each other in memory
那样已经足够……
That will be enough.

有时候，抱得越紧，越难长久
Sometimes, the tighter you hug, the harder to keep it lasting.
因为……
爱。需要博大的心胸
Love needs a great heart,
爱。也需要自由的宽容
and a tolerance to freedom

人世间，坎坷道路
Life is always tough.
命运之神，并不一定是永远的慈父
The god of fate is not always like a father.
他只是在我们成功的背后
给予我们成功的欢乐
He just give us the happiness of success after we succeeded.
所以……
So...
爱，更需要时间的磨练和坚定的考验……
What love needs more is the trial of time and will ...

最后一句译成时间和意志的考验，because I think that is more meaningful.

人工翻译。

Answer 2

手译的,不过我有必要提醒你,英文里的诗好像不是这个样子的.
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爱。也需要距离
In love, we also need distance.
我不知道这样做是否正确
I don't know whether it's right to do so.
我只知道爱一个人并不一定要把她拥有
I just know love dosen't necessarily mean to own her.
只要能存活在自己的心中
As long as she lives in my minds
在记忆的时光里，拥有对方的笑容
In the memories, I do have her sweet smiles
那样已经足够……
It's enough

有时候，抱得越紧，越难长久
Sometimes, the tighter you hug, the harder to be eternal
因为……
Just because
爱。需要博大的心胸
love needs broad mind
爱。也需要自由的宽容
love also needs free tolerance

人世间，坎坷道路
In this world, full of frustrations.
命运之神，并不一定是永远的慈父
God of destiny not necessarily is forever kind
他只是在我们成功的背后
He is only on hte back of our success,
给予我们成功的欢乐
to offer us the enjoyment of achievements
所以……
Therefore
爱，更需要时间的磨练和坚定的考验……
love needs time and firmness to testify.

Answer 3

Love.Also needs to be apart from
I did not know does this whether
I only knew a love person not necessarily must her have so long as can survive in own heart
In the memory time, has opposite party to smile
Such already was enough…
Sometimes, hugs tightly, difficultly long
Because of…
Love.Needs the great heart love.Also needs during the free tolerant world, god of the rough path destiny, not necessarily is forever kind
He only is the back which succeeds in us
Gives us to succeed happy
Therefore…
Love, demand time disciplining with firm test ......

Answer 4

Love. Also need to distance I do not know whether this is correct, I only know that love is not necessarily a person should have as long as she can be self-survival their hearts in memory of the time, with each other's smile did enough ... Sometimes, with the more pressing, the more difficult because of a long love .... Largeness of mind needs love. Also need freedom of tolerance earthling, bumpy road destiny God, is not necessarily always the fatherly he was just behind our success to our success so happy ... love, need more time and the rigors of the test firm ...