Question

求英语大神帮忙修改一篇英语作文看看哪里有语法错误或者词性错误的麻烦标记，感激

The student who wrote the followingdescription made a few errors with verb tenses. Find the errors and correct them.
Morgan Park on the north shore of Long Island Sound in Glen Cove is abusy place this sunny Sunday
afternoon. From my position, I can see the distant foggy shore of New Rochelle andthe white sails of
boats in the harbor. The sun makes millions of tiny stars in thegrayish waters of the sound.
As I look around, I can see people of different ages: young, middle-aged, and old. In many of the
families here, three generations hadgathered on the beach to enjoy the fine weather. The older people
tendto prefer the shady areas under the trees, while the younger ones splash in andout of the water.
Nextto us, two men play chess. My husband islooking at them curiously because he likes to play
chess, too. I know he wants to join them. Infact, after a little while, he walks over to talk to them. Now
heis taking one of their seats and joining in the game. Meanwhile, I am finding a comfortable position
in my beach chair. To my right, a large family occupies spaceunder a big old tree. They broughtenough
foodand drinks to spend a whole weekend here! The men are playing cards, the women are reading
newspapers and magazines, and the childrenare chasing a ball. In front of me,there are two women
wearing long black dresses. The only thing they bring is a big radio, butto my relief, it remains silent.
Suddenly, gray hazy clouds cover thesun. It is getting darker and mighteven rain. People quickly
pick up their belongings—blankets, beachtowels, chairs, portable coolers. Thepath leading to the
parking lot is suddenly crowded. The only people that don’t know what is goingon are two chess
players: my husband and the other man. I’m going to have to stop writing and tellthem to move.

Answer 1

其实我不主张在写作文时先写好中文底稿再翻成英文的，一是浪费时间，二是你用中文写出来的文章未必能一字不漏的译成英文。很多时候是不能直接用中文的思维来翻译的。但既然写成中文了，要译成英文也不是没有办法。\r\n\r\n首先，要有心里准备，并不是说能完全表达出中文中的完美信息的。然后慢慢的把大意翻出来，能表达清楚是最好的，有时用些地道的英语也很必要。左后再做些修改，看看有没有什么语法错误，词汇的词性有没有用对，时态对吗？之类的，应该差不多了

追问

这个是书上的一个练习，本来就是要叫我们修改出语法错误。。。。我改不出来！