Question

航空面试时，用英语自我介绍，请大家帮帮忙，翻译一下 要语言优美

我叫张玉洁 今年18岁 身高170，体重45公斤 。我来自江苏沛县，，性格开朗活泼；我是一个充满梦想的女孩，有着对未来美好的憧憬；我喜欢画画，希望有一天可以用自己的画笔在天空中画出所有的美好 分享给大家、我希望各位老师可以让我有这个飞上蓝天展翅翱翔的机会，相信我不会让您失望

Answer 1

首先，我觉得你应该有一个英文名，就叫Jade吧，跟你的中文名字挺配的。
第二，你要说的话有些翻成英文不太容易懂，比如“希望有一天可以用自己的画笔在天空中画出所有的美好 分享给大家”，所以，我帮你改了点。但我下面写给你的自我介绍绝对让面试官佩服的。
Hello. My name is Jade Zhang. I'm 18 years old. I'm 170 centimeters tall and weighs 45 kilos. i came from Pei County in Jiangsu Province. I'm outgoing and sociable. I'm full of dreams and aspirations of a beautiful future. I love painting and as a child I had always fantasized about using the blue sky as a canvas to create beautiful paintings. And this is my chance to realize that dream, with my dedication and personable service. Please give me this chance to realize my dream of soaring in the blue skies of life. I will not disappoint you, I promise. Thank you.

Answer 2

My name is Yu-Jie Zhang. I'm 18 years old. 170cm, 45 kg. I come from Pei County, Jiangsu. I'm cheerful and lively; I am a girl full of dreams and have a beautiful vision of the future; I like drawing and hope that one day I can to draw all the beauty in the sky for all to share with my own brush. I hope that you can give me this opportunity to fly in the sky and I believe I will not let you down

Answer 3

I'm 18 years old this year, Yu-Jie Zhang, height 170, weight 45 kg. I am cheerful and lively,coming from Pei County, Jiangsu province; I am a girl full of dreams, having a beautiful vision of the future; I like drawing, hoping that one day i can make my own brush to draw all good things in the sky and share them with everyone,I hope that the teacher can let me have this opportunity to fly wings to the sky , I believe I will not let you down