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Thereusedtohaveabeautifulgardeninthefrontofmyhouse.Iusuallyhelpedmygrandfathergrowing...
There used to have a beautiful garden in the front of my house.I usually helped my grandfather growing flowers in the garden.When free,I often read interesting story in the garden with himself,lost to the outside world.However,my uncle bought a car two years before and he built a garage where we used to grow flowers.With the garden gone,both my grandfather or I miss the days we spend together in it.Then the air in the garden was so well to breathe.In my opinion,I rather have a garden of my ownn than own a car.
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There used to have(have改为be) a beautiful garden in the(the去掉) front of my house.I usually helped my grandfather growing(改为grow) flowers in the garden.When free,I often read interesting story(改为stories) in the garden with himself(myself),lost to the outside world.However,my uncle bought a car two years before(改为ago) and he built a garage where we used to grow flowers.With the garden gone,both my grandfather or(改为and) I miss the days we spend together in it.Then the air in the garden was so well(改为bad) to breathe.In my opinion,I (+would)rather have a garden of my ownn than own a car.
2011-06-08
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There used to be a beautiful garden in front of my house.I was usually helped my grandfather grow flowers in the garden.When free,I often read interesting story in the garden with him,lost to the outside world.However,my uncle bought a car two years ago and he built a garage where we used to grow flowers in.With the garden gone,both my grandfather and I miss the days we spend together in it.Then the air in the garden was so well to breathe.In my opinion,I‘d rather have a garden of my own than a car.
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have--be
helped---help
growing---to grow
interesting--interested
story--stories
himself--myself
two years before==two years ago
or==and
Then--Though
I rather---I"drather
helped---help
growing---to grow
interesting--interested
story--stories
himself--myself
two years before==two years ago
or==and
Then--Though
I rather---I"drather
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