Question

英语短文改错

Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. ___
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my ____
further education.Two hundreds and twenty students took the exams ___
for it,but only a few was chosen and I was one of them.However,__
my parents are not happy about it.They are strong against me ___
going there.They say it is too far that they will not see me ___
for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely.They ___
can't imagine a girl so young live alone.They advise me to study ___
in the capital instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with ___
them.How can I persurade them to sccept the fact I have grown up? ___
Best wishes.
jane

麻烦英语好的帮我改下。谢谢!

Answer 1

1 去掉got
2 have 和offered 中间加个been
3 hundreds 去掉 s，改为hundred
4 only a few was 中的was改为were
5 strong改为strongly
6 too改为so
7 of 改为 that
8 a girl so young 改为 so young a girl
9 capital 后面加 city
10 to accept 改为 accepting

Answer 2

1:删去a
2:have后架been
3:hundreds改为hundred4
4:第一个was改为were
5:strong改为strongly
6:too改为so
7:a改为the
8:对
9:对
10:sccept改为accept

Answer 3

1.删去got
2.have后加been
3.hundreds改为hundred
4.第一个was改为were
5:strong改为strongly
6:too改为so
7:a改为one
8.a前面加how
9:对
10:sccept改为accept