Question

英语短文改错...

It was a long time since we last saw eash other.You can hardly inagine how I miss you.How are you getting with your first job?I remember you once tell me you were eager to graduate and become an English teacher.Now you must have many first-hand experience.How do you find your English teaching?Is teaching kids Eenglsh as interested as you expecterin college?And do your student enjoy your classroom teaching?Anyway, I belive youmust vety popular with the kids,for you are a bom teacher.
hope you great success in your work!yes,why not give me call and come for a get-together in this weekend.

最好能说明为什么错，不胜感激

Answer 1

It has been a long time since we last saw each other.(since+具体的动作或时间点，前面一般现在完成时，表示从过去一直持续到现在)。You can hardly imagine how much(加上表示程度的much比较好) I miss you. How are you getting on/along(固定搭配，缺少介词) with your first job? I remember you once told(时态不对，应该是过去时) me you were eager to graduate and become an English teacher. Now you must have much(后面experience做经验讲不可数，最好改作many,这样改动小一点) first-hand experience. How do you like (how do you like……固定短语，你觉得sth怎么样)your English teaching? Is teaching kids English as interesting(此处用interesting而不是interested,因为主语不是人而是teaching kids English) as you expected in (缺少介词) college. And do your students enjoy your classroom teaching? Anyway, I believe you must be(缺少be动词) very popular with the kids for you are a born teacher .I(缺少主语) wish（hope后面不可以直接接名词短语）great success in your work! Yes, why not give me a（a不能少）call and come for a get-together （in多余，应去掉）this weekend.

Answer 2

It is(到现在为止) a long time since we last saw each other.You can hardly inagine how I miss you.How are you getting on / along (少了介词)with your first job?I remember you once told (是过去的事情)me you were eager to graduate and become an English teacher.Now you must have got a lot of (修饰后面的不可数名词) first-hand experience.How do you find your job(用同位语)---- English teaching?Is teaching kids Eenglsh as interesting (令人感兴趣) as you expected in college?And do your student enjoy your classroom teaching?Anyway, I believe (字写错了)you must be (漏了be) very popular with the kids,for you are a born teacher. I
wish(不能用hope) you great success in your work! Yes,why not give me call and come for a get-together (IN不要) this weekend？