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英语短文改错 学的好的来帮忙啊 谢谢了 加急啊

I asked jack,a frieng of mine ,what has happened to him that night.He said that he had just got into bed on about half past eleven when the floor began to shake under him.The bed was also started shaking.Heiumped out of his bed rapid and wanted to turn the light on.But the floor was shaking such violently that he could hardly reach the lamp.It seemed to take him long time to get to it and turned it on.then he went to look out of the window.He saw that the houses on the other side of the street was also shaking.Then he knew that was happening--an earthquake!He quickly put on his clothes and ran out into the street to wait for until it was safe to go back inside.
一共有10处啊

Answer 1

1 他身上发生了什么应该用had happened.
2 在十一点半睡觉应该用at about half past eleven
3 床也开始摇晃，应该把was去掉
4 他迅速跳下床，应该是rapidly
5 地板如此剧烈地摇晃，应该用so，不是such
6 他花了很长时间才够着灯，应该是get it, 把to 去掉
7 街对面的房子在摇晃，应该是were ,不是was
8 然后他意识到发生了什么，应该是what was happening
9 跑到街上ran into the street,没有out
10 等待应该是wait,把for 去掉
很辛苦地总结，希望你能采纳

Answer 2

I asked jack,a frieng of mine ,what had happened to him that night.He said that he had just got to bed about half past eleven when the floor began to shake under him.The bed also started shaking.He jumped out of his bed rapidly and wanted to turn the light on.But the floor was shaking such violently that he could hardly reach the lamp.It seemed to take him long time to reach it and turned it on.then he looked out of the window.He saw that the houses on the other side of the street was also shaking.Then he knew what was happening--an earthquake!He put on his clothes quickly and ran into the street to wait until it was safe to go back inside.

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一共有10处啊 可以一一指出么？谢谢了啊