Question

我要参加新加坡的考试，这是面试的自我介绍，我希望有好心的人帮忙翻译成英文！我很急！谢谢！！！！

各位考官你们好！
首先我非常感谢你们能给我这次面试的机会，接下来，让我做下自我介绍，我叫....，你也可以叫我Aldrich，我非常喜欢新加坡，众所周知这是一个如花园般美丽的国家，新加坡被称为花园城市，也被称为狮城，新加坡英式的教育不仅推崇因材施教，而且也致力于培养精英人才，新加坡作为全亚洲政治稳定性最高的发达国家之一，经济发达，交通便利，双语环境，多元文化营造更适合中国学生的留学环境，我想这样一个色彩丰富的花园城市融合了西方文化及丰富的亚洲传统和现代化的和平共处的地方，是一个充满活力的大都市。
其次我非常喜欢这个最广泛的语言——英语，所以我想新加坡也是个提高英语水平的最佳地方。
下面介绍一下我的家乡吧！我非常喜爱我的家乡，四季交换，美景不断，仙鹤在头上萦绕的感觉一定会让你如痴如醉。我们这里的人忠实，好客，想必新加坡的人若想来的话，这一定是个你梦寐以求的旅游圣地。
最后，再说说自己吧！我在体育方面篮球可以说在校内有名的人物，曾被校队队长两次邀请，足球也是班内的主力队员，而且每次都能组织好同学们进攻和防守，战胜那些实力雄厚的队伍，如果这回有机会能去新加坡，想必那里又会多了一个高手呢，我其实是一个非常热爱音乐的人，曾在新东方的才艺比赛中杀进前十，我最拿手的乐器就是竹笛，虽没参加过什么比赛或演出，但每次笛声响起时都会使人陶醉其中，我也特别希望让这优美的天籁之音飘扬在新加坡的上空。我非常喜欢交朋友，尤其是来自五湖四海的，但我交友原则是：一定要交到会说我坏话的朋友！但是我这个人对美术和舞蹈不是很在行，也不是很了解，但我相信，如果这次有机会去新加坡留学的话，我会爱上这些的。
三年前美丽的新加坡只会在我的梦中出现，三年后的今天，我拥有的亲眼看到这个花园城市的机会，踏上这片美丽的国土，我会尽快适应那里优雅的生态环境，和谐的人文生活，我相信，果实的结晶是花朵奋斗的结果，三年的努力，今天即将实现，老师们相信我吧！我会给您一个满意的答复！你会知道新加坡需要我，我需要新加坡！

Answer 1

Hello! Everyone examiner
First, I thank you can give me this opportunity, next, let me do next to introduce myself, my name is... And you can also call me Aldrich, I really like Singapore, as it is known that this is a like a garden beautiful country, Singapore is called the garden city, also known as the lion city, Singapore education not only extol the British teach students in accordance with their aptitude, and also work to develop the elite, Singapore as all of Asia political stability of the developed countries, the highest one of developed economy, the transportation is convenient, the bilingual environment, DuoYuan culture create more suitable for Chinese students to study abroad environment and I think it a colorful garden city shirt-sleeve the western culture and rich Asian tradition and modernization of peaceful coexistence of place, is a vigorous cosmopolitan city.
Secondly, I very like the most widely used language, English, so I want to Singapore is also a the best place to improve your English.
Introduce below my hometown! I love my home town, the four seasons exchange, beauty, crane head haunt in constantly feel will let you out. We the people here faithful, hospitality, and I thought the man had come to Singapore, this must be a you dream of tourist sanctuary.
Finally, say again yourself! I in athletics in the school basketball can say famous characters, who used to be in the school team captain twice inviting, soccer is the main players in the class, and each time it has ability to organize the students offense and defense, win over the strength of the team, if this time have a chance to go to Singapore, thought there will be more and a master it, I was actually a very love music, was in new Oriental's talent competition killed into top 10, I best Musical Instruments that bamboo flute, although not involved in any game, or performance, but every time whistle sounds can make people enjoy them, I also wish to the melody of the soothing sounds of flying over in Singapore. I very like making friends, especially from all over the world, but I make friends principle is: must pay to bad-mouth me friend!!!!! But I'm a fine arts and dance is not good at, is not very understand, but I believe that, if the have the opportunity to study in Singapore it, I will fall in love with them.
Three years ago the beautiful Singapore will only in my dream, three years later today, I have to see with my own eyes the garden city, on the chance of the beautiful land, I'll get used to the ecological environment of the elegant there, the harmony of human life, I believe, is the crystallization of the fruit flowers, the result of the struggle for three years of efforts, today will come true, the teachers believe me! I'll give you a satisfactory reply! You will know Singapore needs me, I need to Singapore！
有道翻译，最好找个精通英语的帮着看看有没有不对的地方。

Answer 2

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The fellow examination officials you are good! First I thank you to be able to give me this interview the opportunity, then, lets me do introduces oneself.my name is...You may also call me Aldrich, I like Singapore, it is well known this is a like garden beautiful country, Singapore is been called the garden city, is also called Singapore, the Singapore English education not only esteems teaches students in accordance with their aptitude, moreover also devotes in training the outstanding person talented person, Singapore takes one of entire Asian politics stability highest developed countries,The economy is developed, the good communications, the bilingual environment, multicultural building suits Chinese student's abroad study environment, I thought that this kind of color rich garden city fused the Western culture and the rich Asian tradition and the modernized peaceful coexistence place, is a vital metropolis.Next I like this most widespread language - - English, therefore I thought that Singapore is also raises English proficiency the best place. Following introduces my hometown! I like my hometown, the four seasons exchange, the beautiful scene am unceasing, Manchurian crane the feeling which lingers on certainly will let you be deluded.Our person is faithful, hospitable, thinks Singapore's people, if wants to come, this certainly is tourist sites which you long for even in dreams. Finally, said itself again! I in the sports aspect basketball may say in the school the famous character, once by school team party chief two invitations, the soccer was also in class's major team, moreover each time can organize schoolmates to attack and to defend, defeats these powerful troop, if this has the opportunity to be able to go to Singapore, thought that there also many masters, I actually will be the human who will deeply love music, once killed in the new East's talent and skill competition advances ten,I most adept musical instrument is a bamboo flute, although has not attended any competition or the performance, but each time the whistle sound resounds time will make one be infatuated with in which, I also specially hoped that will let sound of this exquisite sounds of nature flutter in Singapore's sky. I like becoming friends, particularly comes from all corners of the country sea, but I make friends the principle am: Certainly must hand over the friend who will speak my malicious remarks! But I am not am an expert to good expert very much to the fine arts and the dance, is also not understood very much, but I believed that if this time has the opportunity to go to Singapore studies abroad, I will fall in love with these.Three years ago beautiful Singapore will only appear in mine dream, three year later today, I have see with one's own eyes this garden city the opportunity, will step this beautiful national territory, I will adapt there graceful ecological environment as soon as possible, the harmonious humanities life, I believed that the fruit crystallization will be the flowers struggle result, three year endeavor, soon realizes today, teachers believe me! I will give you a satisfactory answer! You will know that Singapore will need me, I needs Singapore!