求五篇暑假英语日记高一水平
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Sunny 31th,July
Today was sunny and i was in a good mood.Tired of studying and a bustle of city life,I came to ecology park to enjoy the gorgeous view and get relaxed in the afternoon。
when I arrived at the park ,the first thing came into my sight was the thick green trees，therefore，the air was fresh,in addition， i could clearly see a path skirting along the pond。laying on the lawn which was decorated by a various of followers and seeing the blue sky,I felt at ease because all I wanted was some peace and quiet。All thing formed a beautiful landscape, and you couldn't imagine how romantic they were!
However，with the time passing so quickly，The day(不是sun) was dying in the west. So i had to go back home! I would never forget such a memorable experience, which was really beyond description!
今天阳光普照，我的心情也很好，厌倦了学习和城市的繁忙景象，我在下午来到了生态公园去享着美丽的风景，来得到放松。
当我来到公园时，首先进入我视线是浓绿的树木，因此，这空气新鲜，除此之外，我可以清楚地看到沿池塘边蜿蜒的小路。躺在有各种花儿点缀的草坪上，看着蓝色的天空，我感到十分惬意，因为我想要的就是是一些和平和宁静，所有的一切都形成了一道亮丽的风景线，你无法想象他们是多么浪漫！
然而，随着时间的快速流逝，日薄西山。所以我不得不回家了！我永远不会忘记这样一个难忘的经历，这是真的无法用言语来形容！
这篇文章中使用了分词结构，定语从句，with的表达方式以及适当的生单词，应该适合你，
Today was sunny and i was in a good mood.Tired of studying and a bustle of city life,I came to ecology park to enjoy the gorgeous view and get relaxed in the afternoon。
when I arrived at the park ,the first thing came into my sight was the thick green trees，therefore，the air was fresh,in addition， i could clearly see a path skirting along the pond。laying on the lawn which was decorated by a various of followers and seeing the blue sky,I felt at ease because all I wanted was some peace and quiet。All thing formed a beautiful landscape, and you couldn't imagine how romantic they were!
However，with the time passing so quickly，The day(不是sun) was dying in the west. So i had to go back home! I would never forget such a memorable experience, which was really beyond description!
今天阳光普照，我的心情也很好，厌倦了学习和城市的繁忙景象，我在下午来到了生态公园去享着美丽的风景，来得到放松。
当我来到公园时，首先进入我视线是浓绿的树木，因此，这空气新鲜，除此之外，我可以清楚地看到沿池塘边蜿蜒的小路。躺在有各种花儿点缀的草坪上，看着蓝色的天空，我感到十分惬意，因为我想要的就是是一些和平和宁静，所有的一切都形成了一道亮丽的风景线，你无法想象他们是多么浪漫！
然而，随着时间的快速流逝，日薄西山。所以我不得不回家了！我永远不会忘记这样一个难忘的经历，这是真的无法用言语来形容！
这篇文章中使用了分词结构，定语从句，with的表达方式以及适当的生单词，应该适合你，
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我还难得写呢 你以为哦 你 而且网上又不好找
上篇作文当中 将 a bustle of city life 改为the bustle of city life
gorgeous view改为gorgeous scenery （因为view是从某个角度看 而scenery是自然景观）
the first thing came into my sight was the thick green trees（was改为were）
难免出点错误，希望谅解。
Rainy 1st August
Today the weather was terrible，so I had to stay at home.
In the afternoon，I finished some homework,then I thought that maybe today was very boring。I stared to surf the Internet ,and I found the movie 《Ghost Rider》which was directed by Mark Steven Johnson by accident and then I began to watch it. The movie told us that a lover of motorcycle called Johnny signed an agreement with a demon in order to save relatives‘’ lives .However,he lost his spirit and had to work for the demon.Then He used his spell to fight with evil . The movie was so exciting that I couldn't be calm 。I would never forget this movie.
今天天气很糟糕，所以我只好呆在家里。下午，我完成我的一些作业，然后我想今天一定会很无聊吧。我便开始上网，偶然地发现了一部由马克·斯蒂文·约翰逊主导的电影《鬼面骑士》，我便开始观看。这部影片讲诉了一个名叫强尼的摩托车爱好者为了挽救他亲人的性命与恶魔签署了一份契约。但是，他因此而失去了灵魂，被迫给恶魔工作。他用他的魔力与邪恶作斗争。这部影片是如此的振奋人心以至于我不能平息我的内心。我永远都不会忘记这部电影。
个人比较喜欢这部电影，但是这部电影是几年前的了，有点老了哦，呵呵
跟你说嘛！我们也要写五篇高一的作文，呜呜呜呜！
请继续追问 要不然我发不上去，字数限制
参考资料： by myself
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