Question

英语高手请进，帮忙看下翻译的是否正确？

花钱翻的，帮忙看下是不是人工翻的，翻得怎么样？

本人性格开朗、有爱心、责任心强、踏实严谨。容易适应环境、善于沟通、有纪律性、能承受工作压力。有很强的学习能力和执行能力。有良好的团队合作以及开拓创新的精神。喜欢把复杂的事物变简单、喜欢从忙碌中体会人生的价值。
I am an optimistic, caring, responsible, practical and rigor person. I am easy to adapt to the environment and good at communicating, and I also a disciplined person and can work under pressure as well as good learning ability and executive ability. I have excellent teamwork and innovative spirit, and like to make the complicated staffs easier and enjoy the value of life from busy time.

Answer 1

是人翻的。错误楼上的指出了，这里不再赘述。
and I （am）also a disciplined person ...这句个人感觉不通，可以译为 I am also a disciplined person with good learning ability and executive ability, who can work under pressure.
能够满足理解层面上的需求，但有些词运用不准确，句式较为单一（总是以I开头， and使用过多）
总体上感觉翻得不地道。。

Answer 2

性格开朗最好用outgoing, optimistic是乐观的意思。挺直译的，需要的话，我可以帮你翻译。

Answer 3

''I am also a disciplined person……’‘少了谓语''am''.