Question

看下我翻译的英语有没有错误。

dear athsstar:
I'm Xuelin Ma.Maybe you are in america now.I know your chinese is not very good,so I used my poor English communicate with you.If I wrote something wrong,please forgive me.But I think it was very interesting- -... I hope to receive your letter soon .Please speak English in order to make my English better.。

Answer 1

dear athsstar:
I'm Xuelin Ma.I think you have arrived in America now.I know your are not very good at Chinese,so I want to communicate with you in my poor English .If there are something that I wrote down was wrong,please forgive me.But I think it was very interesting- -... I hope to receive your letter soon .Please writing in English ，so I can improve my English better.。

有些小的错误，以及表达过于单一，修改了一下，希望能帮助你

Answer 2

america 首字母大写
used改 use
communicate 前加to
hope 改 wish（貌似hope 没有to do 把 只能加that

Answer 3

1.America
2.used改成am using
3.to communicate
4.wrote 改成 have written
5.was改成is
6.please write in English
（hope改wish是错的，wish代表了不可能实现的愿望）

Answer 4

america改为America
used改为use(你现在跟他交流不用过去式)
so I usemy poor English communicate with you. 改为so I use my poor English to communicate with you.(用动词不定时,use to do )
wrote 改为write（不需用虚拟语气）
speak English 改为write in English（如果你想表达的意思是让那人用英语回信就这样改，如果你想表达的意思是让那人跟你说英语 那就不用改）

希望对你有帮助。