Question

英语周报短文改错

The day before yesterday,I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy the reference.It was Saturday,so there had mangy people.with a shop assistant's help,I quickly got the book.I was badly in need.Iwas about to leave whule Ifound songmeone trying tosteal a man's money/nervous although I was,Itried to think of a way to help.Suddenly,a good idea struck on me.Istrpped on the man's foot deliberate.As expected,the man's scream gives,the thief a flight, who quickly walked out of the shop.After hear my explanation the man smiled and showed gread gratitude to me.

不容易啊、终于打完了、明天上午用呢、我只找了3个比较确定的。哪位英语高手给我做下给我个参考、感激不尽

Answer 1

The day before yesterday,I went to the bookstore where（which） is near our school to buy the reference.It was Saturday,so there had（were） many people.with a shop assistant's help,I quickly got the book.I was badly （really）in need.Iwas about to leave whule（when） I found someone trying to steal a man's money/nervous although I was,Itried to think of a way to help（加上him）.Suddenly,a good idea struck on me.I stopped on the man's foot deliberate（deliberately）.As expected,the man's scream gives（gave）,the thief a flight, who quickly walked out of the shop.After hear（hearing） my explanation the man smiled and showed（expressed） great gratitude to me.

括号里的是改的， 供参考。希望能帮到你。

Answer 2

where 改成 which
there had 改成 there were
while 改成 when
although 改成 as
deliberate 改成 deliberately gives 改成 gave
hear 改成hearing

Answer 3

I went to the bookstore {Which/That} is near our school to buy the reference.
so there {Were} many people.
nervous {As} I was
Istrpped on the man's foot {deliberately}
After {hearing} my explanation the man smiled and showed great gratitude to me.
I was about to leave {when} I found songmeone
我找到了这么多（不知你是否打错字）。