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麻烦翻译一下。

您好！首先感谢您能抽出宝贵的时间来看我的自荐信。
很高兴有这个机会申请去加拿大留学。本人是台山一中刚毕业的学生。现在被暨南大学法学专业录取。在过去的学习生活中，我勤奋刻苦，力求向上，课余时间积极地去拓展自己的知识面，并积极参加体育活动
如今站在新世纪的起点上，有无数的机会，更有种种的竞争与考验，而作为正要迎接大学生活的我，以满腔的热情和信心去申请这个留学机会。当今社会需要高质量的复合型人才，因此，我时刻注意自身的全面提高，包括领导能力，组织能力等等。。在三年高中学习生活中，我能够自立自主去学习，而且经常帮助老师组织班里的各种活动。
我的兴趣是写作。这对培养我的独特思想和提高我的语言组织能力有所帮助。而且，还可以时刻反省自身。我的爱好是学习英语，平时爱听英文歌曲和看外国电影。这可以让我更加了解外国文化，也对我出国留学有所帮助。
多年的学习生活，铸就了我勤奋诚实，坚忍不拔，积极热情的性格，培养了我拼搏向上的精神，提高了自我判断、策划、协调等多方面能力，为自己注入了全新的营养，为今后的出国留学生活打下了基础。所以，希望能有幸获得这次机会，去到艾伯特大学学习，把自己培养的更好。
对于未来，我还是会慢慢做好计划。如果有幸能出国留学，我一定会努力充实自己，把自己培养成各方面都很优秀的新型人才。
虽然我可能不是最优秀，但是我会变得越来越优秀的，机会是别人给予的，但是机会更是自己去把握的，不管这次的申请能否成功，我都会好好深造的。

Answer 1

得付费哦，这么长。这么重要的东西就想免费获得了？
呵呵

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。。。。。。不重要。。。。都是我自己敲出来的。。。。。要是重要就去找出国公司写了。。。

Answer 2

Hello!!!!! First of all thank you for taking the time to see my precious recommendation.

Very glad to have the opportunity to apply for to go to Canada to study abroad. I was a graduate student in taishan. Now jinan university legal science specialized admitted. In the past the study life, I work hard and strive to upward, after school time actively expand own aspect of knowledge, and take an active part in physical activities

Now stand in the new century, the starting point with countless opportunities, have more of all sorts of competition and test, and as was about to meet the life of university, I with full of passion and confidence to apply for the opportunity to study abroad. In today's society need high quality talents, therefore, I always pay attention to own improve, including leadership, organization ability and so on.. In the three years of high school study life, I can go to learn, and independent independent often help the teacher organizations of various activities in the class.

My interest is writing. The train of thought and improve my unique I language organizational ability help. And, still can reflect on their time. My hobby is learning English, usually listening to English songs and watching foreign movies. This can let me understand more about foreign culture, and also to my studying abroad help.

DuoNian study life, created I diligence honest, perseverance, enthusiasm character, and train I struggle and progressive spirit, improve the self judgement, planning and coordination ability, for their many aspects such as to inject the brand-new nutrition for future study abroad life lay the foundation. So, hope to get the opportunity to Albert university studies, train for the better.

As for the future, I will still be slowly plan. If lucky to go abroad to study abroad, I will work hard enrichment oneself, training ourselves into all aspects are excellent talents.

Although I may not be the best, but I will become more and more excellent opportunities, it's other people give, but opportunities are to grasp, no matter the application of success, I will be good for further study.