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Nowadays,asthedevelopmentoftheglobeeconomyandinternationaltrade,increasingpeoplecould...
Nowadays ,as the development of the globe economy and international trade,increasing people could have much more opportunities to visit other country for tourist or business than before,but this progress also caused a series problems, whether the local customs and behaviour should be followed is one of them,different people should hold various point of views,as for as I am concerned, it is better to respect different customs and behaviour in different country
There is a proverb called when in roma do as the romans do,this experience was concluded by ancient people,and also this could the best evidence to argue with the people who agree the view of it is no necessary to do what the local people do,respecting other cultures and behaviours could as equivalent as respecting other people,this is the most essential polite which a adult should be mastered,if someone don't do that,it will makes the local people fell very unpleasant and hurt them emotionally,what is worse, a foreigner also represent his or her country,maybe this unpolite behaviour will ruin their country's positive impress in other countries.
Additionally, I want to emphasize that this kind of unpolite behaviours also cause some uncomfortable and embarrassing situations for other country's people,for instance In china It is very common to ask other person like where do you want to go or have you had your lunch and so on. in fact the person who asked them doesn't really care about their destination and whether they have had their lunch ,this is only a kind routine,but asking the same questiones to other country's people is not a good idea,maybe a mount of misunderstandings will be produced,they will be confused,like why does he or she want to know my destination?what are their purpose?these questions only mean hello in china,but it will make some misunderstandings in other country
Hence,there are so many negative influences if a person don't follow other country's local customs and behaviours will be happen,that could prove my point of view is right,actually I courage the exchange between different country,but the first thing what we need to do is respect their country's culture. 展开
There is a proverb called when in roma do as the romans do,this experience was concluded by ancient people,and also this could the best evidence to argue with the people who agree the view of it is no necessary to do what the local people do,respecting other cultures and behaviours could as equivalent as respecting other people,this is the most essential polite which a adult should be mastered,if someone don't do that,it will makes the local people fell very unpleasant and hurt them emotionally,what is worse, a foreigner also represent his or her country,maybe this unpolite behaviour will ruin their country's positive impress in other countries.
Additionally, I want to emphasize that this kind of unpolite behaviours also cause some uncomfortable and embarrassing situations for other country's people,for instance In china It is very common to ask other person like where do you want to go or have you had your lunch and so on. in fact the person who asked them doesn't really care about their destination and whether they have had their lunch ,this is only a kind routine,but asking the same questiones to other country's people is not a good idea,maybe a mount of misunderstandings will be produced,they will be confused,like why does he or she want to know my destination?what are their purpose?these questions only mean hello in china,but it will make some misunderstandings in other country
Hence,there are so many negative influences if a person don't follow other country's local customs and behaviours will be happen,that could prove my point of view is right,actually I courage the exchange between different country,but the first thing what we need to do is respect their country's culture. 展开
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