Question

谁能帮我看下这英语句子有什么错误。

Aron Ralston, do you know his story Oh, i could tell you now.
One day in April , he went to climb a mountain.He thought he can deal with any problems, so he did that alone.
His MP4 fall off his pocket while he was climbing. He wangt to pick up it,but he fall into a deep hole,and he found himself in a very dangerous situation when he waked up.
He discovered his arm became trapped under a rock.
Nobady found him.
He was helpen by his brave.
The hope with you, however you often lose something when you in a dangerous siyuation. Everone have to do one thing that is keep himself lif.

急求啊 回答的又好又快的加分，小弟在此跪求了。

Answer 1

i could tell you now.改为i will tell you now
he can deal with 改为he could deal with
pick up it改为pick it up
he fall into 改为he fell into
He discovered his arm became 改为He found his arm trapped under a rock
He was helpen by his brave.改为He helped himself with the courage.
后面一句改为The hope always be with you, however you often lose something when you are in danger.
后面一句改为 Everone must to do the only thing saving his life.

Answer 2

1.He thought he could deal with all the problems.
2.He wanted to pick it up,but he fell into a deep hole.And he found....when he get awake.
3.He helped himself ...
4.Although the holp is with you ,you often .....when you are in a dangerious situation.
5.Everyone has to do one thing that is to keep himself lif.

Answer 3

第二行can为could 第四行fall为fell wangt 肯定不对 第六行became 最好改为was 倒数第三行brave 改为bravery 最后两句意思不明啊

Answer 4

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