Question

看看这句英语有错没有啊，有语法错误码？

When alive ,we may probably offend some people.However, we must think about whether they are deserved offended

Answer 1

When alive, we may probably offend some people.However, we must think about whether they are deserved offended.
这全句的主要词在于 deserve 的用法。
按照你的原句子，“they are deserved offended”中，offended 是过去分词做主语补足语。由于deserve 的用法是 “deserve to be done”结构，所以这里的句子改为：“When alive, we may probably offend some people.However, we must think about whether they deserve to be offended.”其他部分无需改动。

Answer 2

When alive ,we may probably offend some people.However, we must think about whether they are deserved to be offended

Answer 3

语法有点问题 think about 后不能直接跟从句

Answer 4

看看这句：
When alive, we may probably offend some people. However, we must think about whether they deserve to be offended.

通常deserve 后面可以直接跟一个名词，或者加上“to be……”, 是被动式，要用过去分词，所以要说“deserve to be offended”。