Question

帮我检查一下有没有语法错误，并翻译

When I was a girl , I thought it was lucky that we ran into each other. But , I shaking my head now. Because, the story proved quite false. It was false that we ran into each other. I think I will always like you. But, I got tired. Because, you did not like me. When I saw you took your girlfriend by the hand, I was feel very worse! I thought I was went to died! But, I must acceptance you did not like me. My eyes have clouded up after you left. I seemed to lose heart in the love after that. My life that days consists of studying and attending classes. I was very busy. Because I did not know what to did. I could not work out how to did sad. How time flies to be sure! I think I am forget you. But I am false. Talking is easier than doing. I was surprised to see you. Suddenly I felt the atmosphere grow tense. I left. Because I was really puzzled what to thought or said. And you are no longer the boy you were. I am no longer the girl I was. I know, how silly of I to do that. But, the question is settled now. I think is not worth my troubling about now . But, it is been lucky to meet you.
有无语法错误

Answer 1

当我还是个小女孩的时候觉得我们相遇是一种缘分.但是现在我不赞同了.
因为发生的一件事情证明我错了.相遇有时候是一种错误.我曾经以为我会一直喜欢你,但是我累了.因为你并不喜欢我.当我看见你和你的女朋友手牵手,那个时候我以为我快死了. 但是我必须接受你不喜欢我这个事实.当你离开后我的视线模糊了.我好象丢失了我的心.
我将自己投入到上课和学习中,我变得很繁忙,因为我茫然不知要去做什么事.时间飞逝,我以为我忘记了你,但是我错了.说往往比做更容易.
看见你我很惊讶,瞬间觉得空气也变得紧张.我很困惑说说什么,你不再是以前的那个你,我也不再是以前的我,我知道做这些使我看上去很愚蠢.但是,问题已经解决了.我认为这不值得我去烦恼.所以,很幸运能再遇见你.

Answer 2

1.I shaking 错误
2.I think I will always like 这个句子应该是过去时态,你过去有这样的观点
3.When I saw you took (take)
4.was feel ====felt
5. was went ----was going
6.how to did sad ??看不懂
7.I am forget ---i have forgotten you
8.But I am false--i am wrong.动不动FALSE 没有那必要
9.grow--grew
10.what to thought or said---to think and say!

就挑10个简单的明显错误.请问你在哪里找到的,这样的英语水平,还是不要写这么深奥的情感故事为好!