Question

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A man once was blind because of an accident.Then he met his lady,but he didn’t know what his girlfriend looks like.One summer,the woman died of stomach cancer and made her cornea transplanted to the man.As soon as recovered,the man searched everywhere for her photoes in sorrow.But he found out nothing except a letter by her.He opened the envelope tremblingly,only to find a blank photo and a sentence on its back.It said:“Please never think of my appearance,the next one you love ,is what I am.”

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Answer 1

括号内是改正的
A man once was blind because of an accident.Then he met his lady,but he didn’t know what his girlfriend looks(looked前后时态不一致) like.One summer,the woman died of stomach cancer and made(had，have sth. done是一个固定用法，意思是：让别人做某事) her cornea transplanted to the man.As soon as (加he，否则句子不完整，as soon as后面要跟句子而不是短语) recovered,the man searched everywhere for her photoes in sorrow.But he found out nothing except a letter by(from介词搭配应该是letter from) her.He opened the envelope tremblingly,only to find a blank photo and a sentence on(in在信纸背面，要用in) its back.It said:“Please never think of my appearance,the next one you love ,is what I am.”

Answer 2

1.because of——due to;
2.recovered——recovering,——he是主语，应该是he recovers.
3.photoes——photos,photo是photograph的缩写；
4.a letter by her——from her;
5.only to 前面的逗号去掉；