Question

请问本文有语法错误或用词不当吗？如果有请指出并改正。

请问本文有语法错误或用词不当吗？如果有请指出并改正。Who is the most important person in your life? The answer to this question is usually the mother. There is no doubt that the most important person in my life is my mother. She gave me life, and she witnessed my growth. When I didn't know anything, she patiently helped me learn bit by bit. She helped me learn to stand and walk, and to form the right values. She put all my needs in front of her. So she was the most important person in my life.

Answer 1

第二句话可以改成 The answer to this question is always my mother.
usually指的是通常，而always才指一直；然后the应改为my，因为没有说明白，the + n 一般指一个唯一的事物，比如说the Earth 地球
第三句话与第二句有所重复 2,3可以合并为There is no doubt that the most important person in my life is always my mother.
第五句话和第六句话 要记住 help + sb + to do sth
第六句话改成 She helped me to learn how to stand and walk,...