Question

请问这句子有语法错误吗?

similar,if you want to understand how to enjoy your lives,you must had a bad time,beat hardship.if you wanna have a great career,you shoud be trained with disaster.this philosophy is come from the well-know business man who named Wang Yongqing from Taiwan.

Answer 1

有。帮你纠正：
Similar -> Similarly
you must had -> you must have
a bad time -> bad times 或 a bad experience
（a bad time 是 玩得不开心的意思，和意图不大一样）
beat hardship. -> and beat hardship.
wanna 是口语拼法，不正规。改成 want to
is come from -> comes from
well-know -> well-known
who named -> named

Answer 2

Similarly ,if you want to understand how to enjoy life ,you must experience a bad time and beat hardships. If you wanna have a great career,you shoud be trained with disasters This is the philosophy from the well-know businessman from Taiwan named Wang Yongqing

Answer 3

这是 汉语式英语。