Question

能不能把这几句英文写得更好啊？

As a result, manufacturers will raise the prices of their products to make up for the lost profit due to the higher tax. When the price of the products increases, people have to pay more for the same producuts they used to pay less for. As a result, the life pressure of the public would increase. On the other hand, since the tax of goods get higher, manufacturers would deduct the wages of their workers in order to make up for their loss of profits . When daily goods cost more and the incomes of people reduce, people will face greater life pressure.

Answer 1

这个是定冠词使用问题，有的用特指有的用虚指。这里推荐商品价格用虚指（不加the），除非你要特指某种商品价格或是某个价格。
In one hand（后面用了On the other hand前面就要对应）, manufacturers will raise price of their products in order to make up for the loss（直接用弥补损失） due to taxation increase. Once price of the products increases, people have to pay more for the same producuts than before（不用说的那么麻烦）, which leads to the an increasing life pressure on people. On the other hand, since the tax of goods gets higher, manufacturers would deduct workers' wages to lower the cost（前面开头用过弥补损失的句型，这里换成削减工人工资以降低成本，全文会更流畅）. When daily goods cost more and income of people reduces, people will suffer （face是面对，这里用suffer承受遭受更好）greater life pressure.

Answer 2

s这个是定冠词使用问题，有的用特指有的用虚指。这里推荐商品价格用虚指（不加the），除非你要特指某种商品价格或是某个价格。
In one hand（后面用了On the other hand前面就要对应）, manufacturers will raise price of their products in order to make up for the loss（