Question

英语短文改错

Dalian,a city by sea,is quite beautiful and the air there is so good to breathe.It is easy to go here by train;beside,you can take a bus or plane as well.Together with my parents,I went to Dalian for a trip in last month.We visited many interesting places,having lots of fun.Dalian is such beautiful a city as even many foreigners go and work there.I met some foreigners there and talk with them.Most of them said they enjoyed our stay in Dalian.After staying there for ten days,we returned home,tired and happy.

Answer 1

It is easy to go here by train; beside, you can take a bus or plane as well. [教师点评]
[语法检查] 请确认本句时态正确
[学习提示] 易混词汇: car, bus, truck, lorry, coach, automobile, jeep, carriage, waggon 都与“车”有关。 <<展开
car: 多指乘坐人的小汽车或轿车。
bus: 一般指公共汽车或大型客车。
truck: 与lorry同义，指卡车或货车，为美国用词。
lorry: 与truck同义，指卡车或货车，为英国用词。
coach: 原义指四轮马车，现指轿式汽车，长途公共汽车，还可指火车设有卧铺的车厢。
automobile: 是汽车的总称。
jeep: 吉普车，指一种小型轻便、适合在崎岖路面或野外使用的车子。
carriage: 指马车，两匹或两匹以上马拉的四轮马。
waggon: 指四轮运货马车或牛车，也指铁路的无盖货车。
[] plane as well 前面冠词缺失
Together with my parents, I went to Dalian for a trip in last month. [教师点评]
[学习提示] 易混词汇: journey, tour, travel, trip, voyage, excursion, expedition, cruise 均含“旅行”之意。 <<展开
journey: 最普通用词，侧重指时间较长、距离较远的单程陆上旅行，也指水上或空中的旅行。
tour: 指最后反回出发地，旅途中有停留游览点，距离可长可短，目的各异的周游或巡行。
travel: 泛指旅行的行为而不指某次具体的旅行，多指到远方作长期旅行，不强调直接目的地，单、复数均可用。
trip: 普通用词，口语多用，常指为公务或游玩作的较短暂的旅行。
voyage: 指在水上旅行，尤指海上旅行，也可指空中旅行。
excursion: 较正式用词，常指不超过一天的短时期娱乐性游玩，也可指乘火车或轮船往返特定景点的远足旅游。
expedition: 指有特定目的远征或探险。
cruise: 主要指乘船的游览并在多处停靠。
[] last month 之前不须加介词 in。
[中式英语] a trip in last month 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
Dalian is such beautiful a city as even many foreigners go and work there. [教师点评]
[语法检查] 语法不规范，请确认
[学习提示] 易混词汇: stranger, foreigner, alien, immigrant 均有“陌生人，外人”之意。 <<展开
stranger: 指对当地的生活习惯、语言等不熟悉，或为某团体不熟的人，也指不认识的人。
foreigner: 指在异国作短期访问或长期居住的外国人。
alien: 指没有成为侨居国正式公民的移民。
immigrant: 指在别国定居并取得所在国国籍的外国人。
[中式英语] dalian is such beautiful 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查
Most of them said they enjoyed our stay in Dalian. [教师点评]
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 enjoy...stay 在教材中出现过 83 次 <<展开
SeeAlso: enjoy check7,enjoy stop5
[学习提示] 易混词汇: appreciate, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。 <<展开
appreciate: 多用于文学方面，强调对事物有深入的理解能力，且能鉴赏。
enjoy: 普通用词，使用广泛，程度不及appreciate,多指从外界事物中得到喜悦与满足，领略到乐趣，享受意味强。
[中式英语] our stay in dalian 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查

Answer 2

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Dalian, a city by (加入the) sea, is quite beautiful and the air there is so good to breathe. It is easy to go (there) by train; (besides), you can take a bus or plane as well. Together with my parents, I went to Dalian for a trip (去掉in) last month. We visited many interesting (places), having lots of fun. Dalian is (so) beautiful a city (that) even many foreigners go and work there. I met some foreigners there and (talked) with them. Most of them said they enjoyed (their) stay in Dalian. After staying there for ten days, we returned home, tired (but) happy.

Answer 3

Dalian,is a beautiful city by sea and the air is so good to breathe.It is easy to go here by train and you can take a bus or plane as well , I went to Dalian for a trip in last month with my parents . We visited many interesting places and we had lots of fun. Dalian is such a beautiful city as even many foreigners go and worked there. I met some foreigners there and talked with them.Most of them said they enjoyed themselves stay in Dalian.After staying there for ten days,we returned home, we are tired but happy.

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