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请大家帮我修改一下文段，语法，词组 什么的 都可以 谢谢 批改一下

we made a cell phone text messages yesterday,I don't know why he was so angry,or maybe i know.whatever we will on own way.By the way,I'm so sorry for everything,i will do what you say,if you trust me you can do what i say,i promise to be true.
I don't know how to talk about those things.but i know all had passed now.No matter how much you love someone, if you lose him, whether you like it or not, time will make the memory fades.I don't know how many stupid things I did, how many times cried、 Talked、Cursed…But i don't care now.A girl don't completely believe a boy,Otherwise you will lose yourself.If you lost yourself, and ultimately he will still lose.
No matter how strong i am,i have a weak point. And sometimes,all i need is a hug.Thanks for my dear friends here.i always happy and later also.i will love like I have never had my heart broken.

Answer 1

we made cell phone text message yesterday,I don't know why he was so angry, maybe i know.whatever we will on own way.By the way,I'm so sorry for anything which i did . if you trust me you can do what i say,i promise to be true.
I don't know how to talk about those things.but i know all had passed now.No matter how much you love someone, if you lose him, whether you like it or not, time will make the memory fades.I don't know how many stupid things I did, how many times cried、 Talked、Cursed…But i don't care now.A girl don't completely believe a boy,Otherwise you will lose yourself.If you lost yourself, and ultimately he will still lose.
No matter how strong i am,i have a weak point. And sometimes,all i need is a hug.Thanks for my dear friends here.i always happy and later also.i will love like I have never had my heart broken.

Answer 2

messages改为单数 don't改为didn't be on our own way