Question

帮忙挑一下语法错误！！万分感谢！！

I graduated from XXX middle school. He is a very old school, is an American in the Guangxu years established. He is the X city covers an area of the largest primary school. I often take my alma mater proud, I often dream of, it will be proud of me, as our mentor Ouyang Zhongshi.
汉文原稿：我毕业于×××初中。他是一所相当老的学校，是一个美国人在光绪年间建立的。他是整个××市占地面积最大的初级中学。我常常以我的母校为骄傲，我也常常会梦想着，它会以我为骄傲，就像我们的学长欧阳中石一般。

Answer 1

错误太多，呵呵。
I graduated from a very old middle school named xxx, which was established by an American during the Guangxu years. It is the largest junior high school of which I often feel proud and I always dream that it will be proud of me, what it is prond of our elder schoolmate Ouyang Zhongshi.

Answer 2

除了第一句，其他的重翻吧。。。