Question

请问这个句子有语法错误吗?谢谢

look on my courage as obtrusion,my presistence as exterme,my research as ignorance,my passion as naivety.when you want to sell your deform experiences to me and look down upon my dream with your contempt,i will give the word of idiot back to you without any hesitation.

Answer 1

你好~
下面是稍作修改后的：You regard my courage as obtrusion, my presistence(单词拼写？)as extreme, my research as ignorance,my passion as childish. When you want to show off(炫耀) your sick experiences and look down upon my dream（look down upon与with contempt重复),i will give the word "idiot" back to you without any hesitation. 写的挺有气势的~
希望能帮到你~满意请及时采纳~谢谢:)

Answer 2

孩子，错误太多了，没法改啊，不知道你要说的是什么。