Question

求英语帝帮忙。

假如你是李华，正在泉州某中学读高二最近，一些外国朋友来你们学校参观。你代表学长向他们介绍你们学校社会实践的情况。内容，要求：所有学生参加社会实践（不少于60小时）否则高中毕不了业；活动：许多活动，如……；好处：学会生活技能、团队合作精神……
开头：
Dear friends,
It's my great to introduce service learning in our school to you.

Answer 1

Dear friends,
It's my great to introduce service learning in our school to you. All the students are required to join the service learning for at least 60 hours, or they can't graduate from high school. There are lots of interesting activities such as the volunteer work, the visit of homeless children, and the outside barbecue. Our students can benefit a lot from the service learning program. We can learn the basic living skills, develop the teamwork spirit and have a lot of fun. Students are all really like it.
Li Hua
写成这样可以吗？我是以高中的水平写的。