Question

用英文翻译一句话，请水平高的帮忙，谢谢~

中文：
1：“如果我能飞。我将会在天空飞。如果我不能哭。我将不哭说再见。”
2：“如果你能飞,我将不能把你捧在手。如果你不能哭,我们的生活将没有色彩。”

英文：
1：“IF I CAN FLY.I WILL FLY IN THE SKY.IF I CAN NOT CRY.I WILL NOT CRY TO SAY GOODBYE.”

最重要的是第二句，希望可以和第一句有点相同的韵味~

Answer 1

1：“如果我能飞。我将会在天空飞。如果我不能哭。我将不哭说再见。”
If I could fly, I would fly in the sky. If I couldn't cry, I wouldn't say Good-bye.

2：“如果你能飞,我将不能看得见你（代表不在我身边的意思）。如果你不能哭,我们的生活将是灰黯无光。”
If you could fly, I couldn't keep you in sight. If you couldn't cry, our life would be turning grey without light.

为了帮你达到前后呼应和押韵的目的，同时将你第二句的中文稍做改动，但仍是符合原意的。你看看能与你希望表达的意思吻合么？

◆注：与事实相反的虚拟语气，必须用过去式，前面似乎都没有一人注意到语法上的问题。

Answer 2

If I can fly. I will be able to fly in the sky. If I cannot cry. I
will not cry to say goodbye
If you will be able to fly, I will not be able to hold you in the
hand. If you cannot cry, our life will not have the color

Answer 3

If you can fly,I will fail to help you with my hand.
If you can not cry.Our world will not have color.

Answer 4

if you can fly, i will not keep you in my hand. if you can not cry, the color of our life will fade away.

thank you ^_^

Answer 5

if you can fly, i will not be able to hold you in my hands. if you can't cry, our life will be no color inside

Answer 6

2. If you can fly, I will not keep you in my hand. If you can't cry, our life will not be colorful.