Question

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I took our foreign teacher Mr.Brown,he came to Chana for the first time,to the Great Wall in last weekend.Having told about the history of the Great Wall,he was amazing at this world wonder.He was struck by the beautiful of the Great Wall.So I took photo of him,which would be a good memory for him.At the top,Mr.Brown was very interested in the activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and sign his name.Both the Great Wall or the Chinese people deep impressed him.He decided to visit more places of interest when free.

Answer 1

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I took our foreign teacher Mr.Brown, (who) came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall (去喊猛掉喊或in) last weekend. Having (加入been) told about the history of the Great Wall, he was (amazed) at this world wonder. He was struck by the (beauty) of the Great Wall. So I took (加入a) photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr.Brown was (so) interested in the activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join (去掉in) and sign his name. Both the Great Wall (and) the Chinese people (deeply) impressed him. He decided to visit more places of interest when free.

Answer 2

翻印为：我把我们的外教老师布朗先生,他来到Chana第一次,长城在上周末。有讲历史的长城,他太令人吃惊弯拿了这个世界的奇迹。他遭到了美丽的长城。所以我拿他的照片,这将会是一个好的记忆给他雀闹仿。在顶部,先生。布朗是非常感兴趣的活动的环境保护他急着要加入进来并签下他的名字。两顷纤个长城或者中国人民给他印象深刻。他决定自由