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Ladies and Gentlemen,      May I pay your attention,please?Now we are looking for a passenger, Mr.White,he is from America.And he is now leaving Beijing to America by Flight 2748.But we were told that Mr.White forgot his passport as well his wallet in Friendship Hotel where he had stayed The manager of the hotel has just telephoned to tell him about it.The manager has been sent his secretary to bring the passport and the wallet here ,and she will come sooner.Will Mr.White  go to gate of our airport and wait for your passport and wallet?She will arrive at about ten minutes.

Answer 1

Ladies and Gentlemen,
May I (draw) your attention, please? Now we are looking for a passenger, Mr.White, (who) is from America. And he is now leaving Beijing (for) America by Flight 2748. But we were told that Mr.White (left) his passport as well his wallet in Friendship Hotel where he had stayed. The manager of the hotel has just telephoned to tell (us) about it. The manager has (去掉been) sent his secretary to bring the passport and the wallet here, and she will come (soon). Will Mr.White go to (加入the) gate of our airport and wait for your passport and wallet? She will arrive (in) about ten minutes.

Answer 2

May I draw your attention,please?
And he is now leaving Beijing for America by Flight 2748
Mr.White left his passport as well his wallet in Friendship Hotel
The manager of the hotel has just telephoned to tell us about it.
and she will come soon。
She will arrive in about ten minutes.