Question

麻烦帮我看看这段英文翻译有没有错误？

中文--
昆山巨星光电科技有限公司是一家专门从事研发、生产、销售各种室内外LED半导体应用产品的企业。公司拥有一流的研发团队，雄厚的技术力量，科学的人性化管理，精湛的工艺水平。我们可以根据客户提供的需求及特殊的性能要求，提供全面，高质量，个性化设计和服务的产品。

本公司的产品广泛应用于休闲广场，公园，城市亮化工程，高层建筑物的外墙造型设计；家庭、酒店的内部装璜，广告发光体效应等众多领域。

公司自成立以来，就采用ISO9001国际质量管理体系的标准进行设计，开发，生产及服务，保证每个生产环节都达到国际化标准，为产品的性能稳定，质量保证，成本合理提供了有力保障。

企业文化：以人为本、团结协作、诚信进取、锐意创新

企业精神：诚 信、专 业、创 新、高 效。

质量方针：
坚持质量第一、不断提高人员素质、依靠技术创新，实施科学管理，为顾客提供满意的产品和服务

英文--

Kunshan Superstar Optotech is a high-tech company specializing in developing, manufacturing
and marketing all kinds of LED illumination products, including lighting decoration,
illumination solutions for buildings, bridges, and other architectures. We own the
international top class R&D team, abundant technology, consummate production line, scientific
humanity management. We have the ability to provide overall, top quality, customized design
and service based on either normal requirement from clients or actual special request from customers.

We have introduced ISO quality management system since our company was founded. The management
system of R&D, manufacturing and service have been established according to the ISO9001 standard
within the company. This has strongly ensured every process of our production meet the international
standard, strongly ensured stable performance, dependable quality, reasonable cost of our products.

Enterprise culture: Based on talents, cooperate with each other, continuous challenge and innovation.

Enterprise spirit: Honesty, Specialty, innovation, efficiency.

Quality policy: Stick to quality first, improve the diathesis，depend on technology innovation and
scientific management, satisfy our customers with good quality products and service.

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Answer 1

Very good effort, much better than many I read on Chinese company web sites. Here's my revision. Please read it carefully. Also, please note, there needs to have two whitespaces between sentences.

"Kunshan Superstar Optotech is a high-tech company specializing in developing, manufacturing
and marketing all kinds of LED illumination products, including lighting decoration,
illumination solutions for buildings, bridges, and other [architectures - it's an abstract term] structures. We [own] have
a world class R&D team, indigenous technology, modern production line and a strong management team. We have the ability to provide top quality, customized design
and service based on either requirements from clients or be a contract manufacturer.

We have introduced ISO quality management system since our company was first founded. The management
system of R&D, manufacturing and service have been established according to the ISO9001 standard. This practice has ensured every process of our production meet the international
standard. Hence, the outcome is, stable performance, dependable quality and reasonable cost of our products.

We value honesty, professionalism, innovation and efficiency.
"

End note:
"
企业文化：以人为本、团结协作、诚信进取、锐意创新

企业精神：诚 信、专 业、创 新、高 效。

质量方针：
坚持质量第一、不断提高人员素质、依靠技术创新，实施科学管理，为顾客提供满意的产品和服务
"
They are similar in concept, hence, condense them into something concise. Remember, less is more a lot of times. By doing that you've demonstrated your quality standard.

Answer 2

Kunshan 巨星 Optotech 是一家高科技公司专攻发展, 制造
而且销售各种的引导照明产品, 包括照明装饰,
为建筑物，桥和其他的建筑学的照明解决。 我们拥有那
国际的顶端班级 R& D 队 , 丰富的技术,成就制造线, 科学的
人性管理。 我们有能力全部地提供, 顶端质量, 根据客户需要修改了设计
而且服务基于或常态来自客户的来自客户或真实的特别请求的需求。

我们已经自我们的公司以后介绍 ISO 质量管理系统被发现。 管理
R&D ，制造业和服务的系统已经被依照 ISO9001 标准建立
在公司里面。 这已经强烈地确定我们的制造每个程序遇见那国际的
标准,强烈地确定稳定的表现，可信任的质量，我们的产品合理的费用。

企业文化: 基于才能,以彼此，连续的挑战和改革合作。

企业精神: 诚实，专门，改革，效率。

质量政策: 对质量第一的根,改良特异质，仰赖技术改革和
科学的管理,以好质量产品和服务使我们的客户满足。

Answer 3

没看出问题，如果可以的话，用英文的行文方式写，这样太生硬了，我能力有限，不能帮你了
可以参考一下网上其它相关行业的外资企业是如何写的，毕竟是给外国人看的，不需要和中文的一句一对，

Answer 4

写的不错