Question

高中英语短文改错,共有十处错误，求高人详解！

Each of us has a strong desire to succeed. The desire is great than that of others. In fact, everyone wants to be successful, so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at first believe in yourself. On your journey to success, you will find that there are no shortcuts . You will never able to completely master every detail of your life. Attemmping to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it's necessary of you to have clear goals. You'd better put your goals on the paper where they are visible so that they can help to moniter your progress.

Answer 1

更正在括号处标出，总共十处错误！

Each of us has a strong desire to succeed. The desire is (greater) than that of others. In fact, everyone wants to be successful, (but) very few are willing to pay the price of hard (work). Success is an attitude and has no (real) secrets. It all (starts) with your belief system. Your belief system starts with (how) you feel about yourself. You must (去掉at) first believe in yourself. On your journey to success, you will find that there are no shortcuts . You will never (加入be) able to completely master every detail of your life. Attemping to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it's necessary (for) you to have clear goals. You'd better put your goals on (去掉the) paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.

Answer 2

Each of us has a strong desire to succeed.
The desire is great【greater】 than that of others.
In fact, everyone wants to be successful, so【however】 very few are willing to pay the price of hard working.
Success is an attitude and has no really【real】 secrets.
It all start【starts】 with your belief system.
Your belief system starts with what【how】 you feel about yourself.
【firstly,】You must at first 【去掉at first】believe in yourself.
On your journey to 【the】success, you will find that there are no shortcuts .
You will never【be】 able to completely master every detail of your life.
Attemmping to do so will only lead to disappointment.
Besides, it's necessary of【for】 you to have clear goals.
You'd better put your goals on the paper where they are visible so that they can help 【you】to moniter your progress.

Answer 3

Each of us has a strong desire to succeed. The desire is great【greater】 than that of others. In fact, everyone wants to be successful, so【but】 very few are willing to pay the price of hard working【work】. Success is an attitude and has no really【real】 secrets. It all start【starts】 with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what 【how】you feel about yourself. You must at first believe in yourself. On your journey to success, you will find that there are no shortcuts . You will never【加上be】 able to completely master every detail of your life. Attemmping to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it's necessary of【for】 you to have clear goals. You'd better put 【加上down】your goals on the 【去掉the】paper where they are visible so that they can help to moniter your progress.