Question

求两篇短文改错，每篇有10处错

A：My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings,left Grandpa alone at home.It was so cold yesterday,however,that none of us wanted to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa tell his experiences in Second Word War.In fact they sounded familiar to us,so we were still listening attentively so as to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa some questions,that he answered in a humorous way.We burst out laughing from time and time and he laughed too.Full of joy,we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.
B:Dear Tom,
Although I'm16 years old,but my father still treats me as a careless children.He doesn't value my opinions.
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house when he did this all time.I think he fails to set an example for me to follow.But he often says:"Doing as I say , not as I do ."
More worse ,he points out my past mistakes to guests,making me feel hurting .I love my father ,but I can't bear what he does . I have been tried many times to talk with him and he never listens.Please help me .
如果有单词上的拼写错误是本人手残，不算在内。积分不够给不了太多，抱歉哦

Answer 1

更正在括号处注明（更正楼上若干错误）。

A：
My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings, (leaving) Grandpa alone at home. It was so cold yesterday, however, that (neither) of us wanted to suffer from the frozen wind outside. So after dinner we (stayed) at home sitting around a fire and (listened) to Grandpa tell his experiences in (加入the) Second Word War. In fact they sounded familiar to us, (but) we were still listening attentively so as to make him (去掉be) happy. Now and then we asked Grandpa some questions, (which) he answered in a humorous way. We burst out laughing from time (to) time and he laughed too. Full of joy, we all felt especially warm (on) the cold evening.

B：
Dear Tom,
Although I'm 16 years old, (去掉but) my father still treats me as a careless children. He doesn't value my opinions.
He is very strict with me and often punishes me (for) leaving things lying around in the house (while) he did this all (加入the) time. I think he fails to set an example (to) me to follow. But he often says:"(Do) as I say , not as I do ."
(Even) worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests, making me feel (hurt) .I love my father, but I can't bear what he does. I have (去掉been) tried many times to talk with him (but) he never listens. Please help me .

Answer 2

A：My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings,left【lefting】 Grandpa alone at home.It was so cold yesterday,however【so】,that【去掉】 none of us wanted to suffer from the frozen【freezy】 wind outside.So after dinner we stay【stayed】 at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa tell【telling】 his experiences in 【the】Second Word War.In fact they sounded familiar to us,so【however】 we were still listening attentively so as【in order】 to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa some questions,that【which】 he answered in a humorous way.We burst out laughing from time and【to】 time and he laughed too.Full of joy,we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.
B:Dear Tom,
Although I'm16 years old,but 【去掉】my father still treats me as a careless children.He doesn't value my opinions.
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house when he did this all time.I think he fails to set an example for me to follow.But he often says:"Doing as I say , not as I do ."
More worse【what's more】 ,he points out my past mistakes to guests,making me feel hurting【hurt】 .I love my father ,but I can't bear what he does . I have been【去掉】 tried many times to talk with him and he never listens.Please help me .【第二遍怎么这么别扭，谁写的？】

Answer 3

A：My cousin and I usually stay(stayed) out late with some friends on Saturday evenings,left(leaving) Grandpa alone at home.It was so cold yesterday,however(therefore),that none of us wanted to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we stay(stayed) at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa tell his experiences in (the)Second Word War.In fact they sounded familiar to us,so(改为but) we were still listening attentively so as to make him be（去掉be） happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa some questions,that(改为and) he answered in a humorous way.We burst out laughing from time and (改为to)time and he laughed too.Full of joy,we all felt especially warm in （改为on）the cold evening.
B:Dear Tom,
Although I'm16 years old,but（去掉but） my father still treats me as a careless children(child).He doesn't value my opinions.
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about(改为for) leaving things lying around in the house when(改为while) he did(does) this all （the）time.I think he fails to set an example for (改为to)me to follow.But he often says:"Doing as I say , not as I do ."
More worse ,he points out my past mistakes to guests,making me feel hurting （改为hurted）.I love my father ,but I can't bear what he does . I have been(去掉been) tried many times to talk with him and （改为but）he never listens.Please help me